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latearrival
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0 posted 2005-05-16 09:27 AM



The Door To Love
The door to love, gone past it's prime
Should be closed.
The memories alone should keep that love alive.
End it, before the embers die.

If you should need to leave, or say goodbye
Do not be distraught.
For I have harvested memories so grand,
That they alone will sustain me,

And leave me with smiles and sparkling eyes.
I would never be alone,
For I have memories to call upon.
A gift to me from you.

jo perry February 200

© Copyright 2005 martyjo - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2005-05-16 09:33 AM


I felt a tightness in my throat, a twinge in my solar plexus ~ and a stirring in my heart as I read your touching poem.

Keep the warm, loving thoughts in your heart for safe-keeping.


EA


latearrival
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2 posted 2005-05-16 11:47 AM


Thank you,I appreciate your replying. Marty
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3 posted 2005-05-16 12:59 PM


"For I have harvested memories so grand,
That they alone will sustain me,"

feelin this

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4 posted 2005-05-16 01:05 PM


Thank God for memories..
They do indeed help to sustain us.
Lovely heart felt write.
Hugs~Nancy

Life is one great big canvas;
throw all the paint on it you can.
                    -Danny Kaye

latearrival
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5 posted 2005-05-16 01:24 PM


Sea, Nancy, Thank you for understanding this. It is for my late husband, who had no choice but to leave me, for a dear woman friend dying of cancer and for a brief love affair shared in between those times. It fits all I think..best martyjo
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6 posted 2005-05-19 05:56 PM


I am in awe of your words, especially after reading your last note ...

You know something about unconditional love!

Beautifully written!

Love, Margherita

latearrival
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7 posted 2005-05-19 06:07 PM


Margherita, thank you for your kind words. I have been around long enough to know that,  what ever love we receive from others should be treated as a cherished gift.  Sometimes it is time to go on , for what ever reason. We need to learn to let that other person go unselfishly. When it is time for someone to die it is only our selfishness that clings to their life.The same if it is time  for them to move on in other ways. Just my opinion. best, marty
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8 posted 2005-05-19 07:38 PM


a very special write here marty
latearrival
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9 posted 2005-05-19 11:24 PM


Thank you Dixie. You are Loved, marty
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10 posted 2005-05-20 08:15 PM


Enjoyed...James
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11 posted 2005-05-20 10:49 PM


Thank you James, marty
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12 posted 2005-05-21 06:03 AM


and marty?
you are loved too

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