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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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journey to the place of laughing water leave your maiden's mantle there on the oak tree's arm let him hold your velvet there is dawn escaping from the hill top she hurries to mark you and to touch your secrets with her warm wanting stand on your tiptoes now and turn slowly let your audience know the hidden sides of you and then the inside of the woman of amber let your voice speak the words of round rooms tell me of the glass walls and how they sooth your agony and inspire your addiction _______________ dark |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You move seasons in here... until all comes full circle... warm and lovely, Sir... |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
of the woman of amber let your voice speak the words of round rooms tell me of the glass walls and how they sooth your agony and inspire your addiction __ wow D....inspiring...  I came from the mountain |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sun..thanks for watching the spring of this nymph as she cavorts a new day _____________ ms greeneyes, can only imagine the flavors of your contimplation thanx lady |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"let your voice speak the words of round rooms tell me of the glass walls and how they sooth your agony and inspire your addiction" ...this I can do....  wow, this is wonderful!  |
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Aleta Member
since 2005-04-17
Posts 102Louisiana |
You sketch a vivid picture, both in beauty and in darkness. Interesting read. |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
d - this is moving - lovely - sensual - and so very intimate to me - thanks for the moment in your eyes - SusanIf I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
suesea..thanks lady for the read and the wiggle in this stream of thoughts ___________ aleta, humble thanks for your eyes ____________ susan mrs, there is room there for your tall trees, thanx for the swirl sounds. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
stand on your tiptoes now and turn slowly let your audience know the hidden sides of you and then the inside this was poignant...it isn't oft a man understands the need to be looked at closer inside...or that women do need to be heard...most men shush us, because they are to busy to notice...with you, it's all about everyone else...they're happiness is yours... refreshing hugs |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
lee j...shhhhh you will ruin my rep' but I do love to listen and watch smiles emerge.. thanks lady friend |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
of the woman of amber let your voice speak the words of round rooms tell me of the glass walls and how they sooth your agony and inspire your addiction Lovely views open up your poem,D - but for some reason, the end speaks to me of [...] the inability to deal with the world. Hmmm... wonder where that connection came from? Guess I'll stop with [the] stream of consciousness...! Indigo (Please do not self-censor profanity by blanking out vowels. That simply doesn't cut it. We prefer that you avoid profanity altogether. I also removed the overt drug reference, as this is a forum for family-friendly content, and unnecessary mention of drugs or drug paraphernalia are not warranted.) --- Local Parasite, Moderator [This message has been edited by Local Parasite (05-16-2005 04:24 PM).] |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms indi just about levels how the day makes one innocent in their declare yet naughty in their presentation more or less thanks lady |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
LP- Duly noted. Didn't mean to offend. Indigo |
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Local Parasite
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
Indigo, Don't sweat it. Hope I didn't embarass you or anything like that. I just didn't think it was big enough of an issue to send you an email about it, nor small enough not to have to explain myself. Thanks for being a good sport. Brian |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
your thoughts~ are always a pleasure to read~ My spirit will rise |
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