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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2005-05-16 08:33 AM

journey to the place
of laughing water
leave your maiden's mantle there
on the oak tree's arm
let him hold your velvet

there is dawn escaping
from the hill top
she hurries to mark you
and to touch your secrets
with her warm wanting

stand on your tiptoes now
and turn slowly
let your audience know
the hidden sides of you
and then the inside

of the woman of amber
let your voice speak
the words of round rooms
tell me of the glass walls
and how they sooth your agony

and inspire your addiction
_______________

dark

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2005-05-16 08:36 AM

You move seasons in here...

until all comes full circle...

warm and lovely, Sir...

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

2 posted 2005-05-16 08:38 AM

of the woman of amber
let your voice speak
the words of round rooms
tell me of the glass walls
and how they sooth your agony

and inspire your addiction

__

wow D....inspiring...

I came from the mountain
The crust of creation
My whole situtaion-made from clay to stone

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

3 posted 2005-05-16 08:43 AM

ms sun..thanks for watching the
spring of this nymph
as she cavorts a new day
_____________

ms greeneyes, can only imagine
the flavors of your contimplation
thanx lady

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

4 posted 2005-05-16 09:10 AM

"let your voice speak
the words of round rooms
tell me of the glass walls
and how they sooth your agony

and inspire your addiction"

...this I can do....

wow, this is wonderful!

Aleta
Member

since 2005-04-17

Posts 102
Louisiana

5 posted 2005-05-16 09:13 AM

You sketch a vivid picture, both in beauty and in darkness. Interesting read.

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

6 posted 2005-05-16 09:54 AM

d - this is moving - lovely - sensual - and so very intimate to me - thanks for the moment in your eyes -

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

7 posted 2005-05-16 09:59 AM

suesea..thanks lady for the read and the wiggle in this stream of thoughts

___________
aleta, humble thanks for your eyes

____________

susan mrs, there is room there for
your tall trees, thanx for the swirl sounds.

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

8 posted 2005-05-16 11:27 AM

stand on your tiptoes now
and turn slowly
let your audience know
the hidden sides of you
and then the inside

this was poignant...it isn't oft a man understands the need to be looked at closer inside...or that women do need to be heard...most men shush us, because they are to busy to notice...with you, it's all about everyone else...they're happiness is yours...
refreshing

hugs

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

9 posted 2005-05-16 03:12 PM

lee j...shhhhh you will ruin my rep'
but I do love to listen
and watch smiles emerge..

thanks lady friend

Indigo
Senior Member

since 2001-05-17

Posts 602

10 posted 2005-05-16 03:27 PM

of the woman of amber
let your voice speak
the words of round rooms
tell me of the glass walls
and how they sooth your agony

and inspire your addiction

Lovely views open up your poem,D - but for some reason, the end speaks to me of [...] the inability to deal with the world.  Hmmm... wonder where that connection came from?  Guess I'll stop with [the] stream of consciousness...!

Indigo

(Please do not self-censor profanity by blanking out vowels.  That simply doesn't cut it.  We prefer that you avoid profanity altogether.  I also removed the overt drug reference, as this is a forum for family-friendly content, and unnecessary mention of drugs or drug paraphernalia are not warranted.)  --- Local Parasite, Moderator

[This message has been edited by Local Parasite (05-16-2005 04:24 PM).]

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

11 posted 2005-05-16 05:23 PM

ms indi

just about levels
how the day makes one
innocent in their declare

yet naughty in their presentation

more or less

thanks lady

Indigo
Senior Member

since 2001-05-17

Posts 602

12 posted 2005-05-16 07:23 PM

LP- Duly noted. Didn't mean to offend.

Indigo

Local Parasite

Member Elite

since 2001-11-05

Posts 2527
Transylconia, Winnipeg

13 posted 2005-05-16 11:46 PM

Indigo,

Don't sweat it. Hope I didn't embarass you or anything like that. I just didn't think it was big enough of an issue to send you an email about it, nor small enough not to have to explain myself. Thanks for being a good sport.

Brian

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

14 posted 2005-05-17 03:35 AM

your thoughts~
are always a pleasure to read~

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

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