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playing on a one tooth flute |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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Babies laughing chubbiness fingers in a ... what is this? hey you think it's funny but yes I guess it is it's this anyway. babies laughing chubbiness let me make some fart noises on your tummy fat and tight babies laughing toothlessness giggling that it's alright like winter snow in melt upon the rocks with light as water songs reflecting dawn and every day is yesterday I sing. Yes, I reach my fingers through the spawn of hues of all these little rainbows you matching all my yester-tears wishing pain so far away I'd spear for it like fish and miss... Damn another day and this is hunger on her side asleep: yes, it is another day alone...another bell is rung the winter snow has melted songs frozen on the cliffs of ice and every day is yesterday wishing life were just a splice of the atom growing-- rice-- life is just that close... it's like? Babies laughing chubbiness... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You have touched a chord in me with this exceptional write, dear poetess! Library to read again! Love, Margherita |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Margherita? I just tried out my daughter's trampoline. I was pretty kinda scared, and felt rubbery. But it was nice, yanno? I jumped a coupla times. I tried to do some fancy stuff but realized I was nuts, so I just lay back, watching the sun come up, through the pecan tree. Yep. I was just laying there, watching the sun come up thru the limbs. I had squirrels looking at ME saying, "WTF?" but yanno? it felt real good on the back...  I might do it again tomorrow! grins |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
haha, serene Serenity! Such a treat! I think I would crack if I tried again, I fear, but I will forever remember the overwhelmingly exciting moments when "sailing" upwards ... wishing to delay the effects of gravity! Nice dialogue you had with the squirrels, haha. They know about playfulness, don't they!? Btw, when it happens that I FLY in my dreams, the dream always starts with that sort of jump-up experienced on the trampoline, a powerful LEAP into bliss! Love, and have a wonderful Sunday! Margherita  |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
nod blush I'm trying to NOT be afraid |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Ya got me smilin with this one babe "we all have wings, but some of us don't know why" |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
serenity Well you got that right. Enjoyed the read sweety.  |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
~smiling~ M |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
I am smiling SO HUGE right now... Ya make me want a trampoline... not so much for 'jumping'... but for 'being'... "I'm trying to NOT be afraid" *smile* You're beautiful...yanno?... Love you, Karen...   |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Karen...it's such fun! I spent my _0th birthday on my granddaughters trampoline.. and it was a hoot! Didn't spill a drop either.  Now I have a mini one for in the house. Hugs YOU! |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Well now, I am still laughing at the offline message about this adventure! Sheesh, go for it gurl! Wish I could hold your hands and jump with y'all.  |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
" just tried out my daughter's trampoline. I was pretty kinda scared, and felt rubbery. But it was nice, yanno? I jumped a coupla times. " Years ago when trampolines were all the rage.I had to try, never acted my age. Hoola hoop was great as was the pogo stick. but the trampoline proved my age and I did more than drip! Good I had worn black slacks as we were at an amusmenent center and I had to drive home. Thanks for the memories. martyjo [This message has been edited by latearrival (05-16-2005 02:04 AM).] |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
LOL, foolish fart-sounds fun...trampolines under pecans...loved this scenery! |
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adagio Member
since 2005-03-19
Posts 449Marrero, La. |
Karen, Lovely and sentimentle! You know I don't have kids of my own, but this almost puts me there in such a wonderfull way. adagio |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
you put your right foot in you take your right foot out... shake it baby -- shake it!  |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Oh yes... and yes again. hugs! |
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adagio Member
since 2005-03-19
Posts 449Marrero, La. |
Karen- Thank you for letting me use your computer tonight. You are so kind for giving me as much time as I wanted to read all these people's talent. The library only allows me one short hour to use theirs, and it flies by much more quickly than you could imagine. thank you again adagio |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
giggling that it's alright like winter snow in melt upon the rocks with light as water songs reflecting dawn and every day is yesterday I sing. Yes, I reach my fingers through the spawn of hues of all these little rainbows you matching all my yester-tears ~*~ Just a little photo for the moment, from a special place for a special woman who is all girl in heart... some rainbows and roses... just 'cause...  |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
For me, (the serial-killer/biker/homelessguy looking yeti... The absolute COOLEST thing to occur on planet Earth, is when an infant (for NO discernable reason) CRACKS him/herself up. Just laugh and laugh and laugh... (perhaps they KNOW its all a joke) |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
agreeing with Ed (yes, they know, They have not been corrupted yet.) But K? matching all my yester-tears wishing pain so far away I'd spear for it like fish and miss... This write made me feel so very good. and this part just hit me right out of the blue . . . literally . . . |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
 Autumn lays on her back on my bed and laughs out loud while looking at the ceiling... which makes me laugh... "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I have realized I'm too old for trampolines now LOL good write |
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