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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Insist Your presence stays my mind a mist My senses and my thoughts insist It stays me like a shroud a cape More a feeling than a shape It dances in a fantasy The essence of a lunacy That fills the phantom of a crave With the antics of a slave I frolic in the uplift breeze Delight in all its form and tease Dance the rhythm of a beat That moves my mind and not my feet I drink this wine until I’m drunk Chant the chanting of a monk Keep it like a miser’s horde And daily whisper, thank thee lord Do I set the flame to bright? I have no shame this candle light |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
I frolic in the uplift breeze Delight in all its form and tease Dance the rhythm of a beat That moves my mind and not my feet Wonderful words to get this day off to a good start. Thankyou Seymour. hugs, Chris Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
And daily whisper, thank thee lord ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ hugging you for that line.  Do I set the flame to bright? I have no shame this candle light ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Now what moth could resist those rhymes... not this one.  Your light is a cadenced delight!  *ww*   |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Insist more, please... Sy, my mind's eyes sees the frolic of a lovholic... and nothing to turn away from... so shroud not ye the sun...  This was delightful, Sy... and you've pushed away the gray of skies! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
If anyone anywhere is sitting under dark clouds today, I am sure the sun will be shining after they read this beauty. LOVELY write sigh Guy, this was perfect! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
what am I going to do without your poems tomorrow and Sunday? This was as my grand daughter would say Happy! smiles and hugs and thank you for another favorite from the mind of Mr. Magestic... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, my Godness! I am currently playing my Chanticleer CD of Gregorian chants! I cannot tell you how many instances where I feel very connected to you, m'friend! In fact, there have been umpteen different times when I will be about to post a poem, and I notice that the one you just posted had several lines or phrases that are the same as the poem that I was about to post!!! I guess it's true what they say! "Great minds think alike!" lol (Mind you, the "G" in your "great" is capitalized!) EA |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Your words are music to the senses that fill the heart with senual delight...Singing words that vibrate within and leave a lasting impression...Sensual and passion laced is this wonderful poem...I love it...*hugs* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Chris, Have a real good day dear. JM, Thank you for the extra comments. WW Sunshine You are a love. Gentle, Thank you sweety. LeeJ Have a wonderful week end. Hugs Earth Angel, It is true many of our lines are similar |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Startime55 You make me blush. LOL Thank you |
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