Open Poetry #35 |
Light of Paradise (Moon Dance) |
A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
The moon came that night, upon her windowsill, she stepped, wearing a thin, white, silken gown, Dancing inside his light, shimmering beams, for her, his queen, upon her head, he had made a crown, She loves the moon,he loves her, the two are quit a pair, for by his light, she is called, As his beams shine through her hair, Casting his magical love around, she dances barefoot for him, brighter becomes his glow, Inside his lighted heart, she must dive and swim, Golden seas of love, with perfect ebb and flow, The moon is always magic, unto my heart, his love forever calls, keeping me under, poetic spell and trance, His light of paradise, shinning forth, we share, lifes verse and song, Dancing our (K)nightly moon dance. "Let me not to the marriage of true minds Admit impediments; love is not love Which alters when it alteration finds, Or bends with the remover to [This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (05-13-2005 01:29 AM).] |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Very good...much better writing...the subject matter is your favourite and you write it very well...thank you for this.. Goldenrose. Justice cannot be for oneside alone, but must be for both. (Eleanor Roosevelt) |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Thank you, yes it is either a blessing or a curse, love is mostly what I am inspired to write about... ~ARH "Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take - but by the moments that take our breath away." |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Love's spell weaves a wonderful fantasy in words that are a joy to read...I love this poem and the dream quality you have given it...Love magic you weave within a vision of pure beauty...*hugs* |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
a wondrous voice beautiful |
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CastleGuard Senior Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 760Alberta, Canada |
Great mood and ambiance, This dream of moon / light dance... A barefoot dance in the moonlight, by a fair maiden....what a sight to behold! That’s what dreams are made of.. Loved it, ARH, truly beautiful. Thank you. CG |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
this is truly a vision of beauty~ My spirit will rise |
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