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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2005-05-11 07:34 AM



soup of glass
does the dragon sip
from the vapored sky

bring me the candles child
let them be your eyes
when you look for gods

at the voice of your window
as they are mirrored sounds
that reflect the maturity

of your innocent interest


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dark


(scribblenote:  INR An agency that is the primary source in the State Department for interpretive analyses of global developments and focal point for policy issues and activities of the Intelligence Community  

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Gentle Spirit
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1 posted 2005-05-11 07:37 AM


always enjoy the view from your eyes Dark,
and love the scribblenotes too.  

LeeJ
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2 posted 2005-05-11 08:11 AM


enjoy the depiction here...your an amazing spirit...thank you and Good Morning!

Sunshine
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3 posted 2005-05-11 08:31 AM


tried to play with this backwards...
and there's almost
another one of those poems
in there...

almost...

Good morning, DS....

SEA
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4 posted 2005-05-11 09:01 AM


very cool write!
Susan
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5 posted 2005-05-11 10:15 AM


Whew!  Them some high falutin' words in the scribble note - must mean they're pretty important, huh? (smirk)

Enjoyed this as always - enjoy your view-

  Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

MGROVES
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6 posted 2005-05-11 10:16 AM



  interesting one~

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

MGROVES
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7 posted 2005-05-12 05:18 AM


of your innocent interest
that reflect the maturity
as they are mirrored sounds
at the voice of your window

when you look for your gods
let them be your eyes
bring me the candles child
from the vapored sky

does the dragon sip
soup of glass

just wanted to see backwords

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

babygirlwlove
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8 posted 2005-05-13 06:33 PM


passing thru your neighborhood...couldn't help but stop to hear that voice~

love&light,
**babygirL**

**Intoxicant to the SouL**

Martie
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9 posted 2005-05-13 07:34 PM


DS

I never heard of the INR...now I know who they are.  Enjoy you here, as always!

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