Open Poetry #35 |
Positive Addiction – spiritual journey |
LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Positive Addiction – spiritual journey she owns fine voice today hand painting a shopper’s image revealing an insider’s view disregarding, mind-set of acid rain not forbidden, by self serving motives first things first… she ponders learning how to leave her cage, by building a connection grabbing the golden ring from the carousel threads corroboration and the greatest story ever told finding the key to utopia where there’s always room for one more and spawned an existent place… is understanding there is no payoff yet, strength giving addictions become imagination with voice so, I’m buying someone else’s happy the learning skills are inspirational it’s merely a lifetime course with a great cup of coffee she needs to be, what no one understands her one true friend…fulfilling missions that wait with the beauty of the world knocking at her door…risking all caring more, then others think is safe oh the wonder lust of autonomy there is a common source of intoxication mundane accommodation at the common place all enclusive there is nothing higher...no better face and ya don't need a wallet to prove it |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
she needs to be, what no one understands her one true friend…fulfilling missions that wait with the beauty of the world knocking at her door…risking all caring more, then others think is safe Lee, this verse does it for me......... and you? are a wonderful friend, and I enjoyed this write, very much. Hugs. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
she ponders learning how to leave her cage, by building a connection grabbing the golden ring from the carousel threads corroboration and the greatest story ever told Lee this is utterly amazing. Thankyou for this today. hugs, Chris p.s. keepin' this! |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
The following verse you wrote is so profound; this write goes in a frame: "with the beauty of the world knocking at her door…risking all caring more, then others think is safe oh the wonder lust of autonomy" Excellent write Lee J. JL |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
yet, strength giving addictions become imagination with voice ~*~ Dang it gal.... thank you! |
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