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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal 
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the unsaid would be spoken with the unbinding of tongues but such words, they may not be uttered within this synagogue of men as I bow before their God’s hewn in unmovable stone their psalms etched in permanent groove concrete in standing I whisper their prayer sounds and kneel in obeisance as a good follower should and all would be well if only I could truly believe in their laws of acquiescence s.a.t. note- this has nothing to do with religion, and all to do about the rules of society made by man - If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Perfect. Eric |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
very well stated sweetie. Good to see you again dear. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
very well done... |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Eric - thank you for leaving the mark of your visit, you smile me  Donna - you are a sweetheart - thank you for the kind words and the warm  SEA - thank you my friend, for reading Hugs all - S If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
a little bit different from you; a bit edgy nice shift of pen here |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
thanks inky - I'm pleased you found it so - even an English Rose can have thorns  - thanks for the eyes, my friend - SusanIf I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
enjoyed~ My spirit will rise |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Sparkles, you have too much spunk, spirit, and intelligence to bend in obeisance to your fellow man! Acquiesce? ~ I think not! Stand strong, Susan! Both you and your pen are mightier than the sword! It was good to read your thoughts once more! I have been missing your poetry and your omnipresence on these blue seas! You are the mistress of your destiny!  Hugs with love, Linda |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
exactly how it is sometimes....being independent and steadfast to ourselves is a sometimes lonely walk, and yet, Susan very very profitable. I was never one to play the game, as well...and prefer it that way. Hugs to you, for this compelling and very honest write...takes courage my friend. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
and you know me an rules? nice work ms...enjoyed it |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Mmmmmm - you are all most kind and what hearts you have - you bless me with your friendship - Sometimes following the rules is done as a gesture of love for another - especially a child - so, we do so for we love them more than our own selfish wants - I just love you all - you warm my heart - thank you - And EA - if the darn words would spill, and the clock would allow me time, I'd be here more Hugs - S If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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