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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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I looked through the tunnel between the windows in the dark of a buick on the wrong side of dawn you were there looking back like a glass of mirror tea pretending to be rain on store front poems rhymed odd and even odd there were lines on your face and words from the sky signs puzzles in puddles playing with their shoes off simple as the answer to wondering the stop light made you mine just for 3 cars and a jeep and you were left when I was right laned making circles out of blocks did you look back for me and wonder what I was reading with my eyes closed and my hands in my lap when my mouth was moved by the soft sides of your name _________________ dark |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
a fantasy at the drivers wheel o yes... please let me hike up my skirt for you mr. truck driver with the big wheels and you glance down while the lights turned red |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
hmmmm inky, lets just pretend the light never changes thanks lady |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
very special things have been born at stop signs m'friend.... enjoyed this view through your eyes this morning babe.  I really want to care, |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I think we could change the title to grin locks... |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Smiling here -  - at you and at the replies -Morning -  SusanIf I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
just to clear this up,,,, was noticing a lady (photo) on the side of a bus..they had done it pretty well as the eyes seemed to follow the viewer... now she is all over town keeping an eye on me... thanks ladies for the reads and smiles |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
the stop light made you mine just for 3 cars and a jeep There you go... aching me again with your brilliant prose. Mmmmm. Indigo |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms indi, your ache is my favorite kind of sooth sauce..you water my mouth with your reply eyes thanks lady |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Yep, my reply still stands then... locking eye to eye... giving grins...  |
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adagio Member
since 2005-03-19
Posts 449Marrero, La. |
Very well done! Being a truck driver myself I can especially relate to this one. adagio |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
GS, thanks to you for the reads this am.. ____________ sunshine...you are fun to have along on these morning drives..thanks lady ___________ adagio, shepherd of the KW's, thanks for the lookover and comment. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
soothsin, slow hugs mrs..thanks for the smile and the wiggle foot |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
oh yes i remember the feel of eyes looking in from their view~ and yes i did give them a view |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms groves...such a naughty image that creates please continue thanks for the read lady |
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