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Open Poetry #35

Seasons of Time

MyHeartofShadows
Member

since 2004-09-04

Posts 88
Hyattsville, MD

0 posted 2005-05-11 02:49 PM

When time found flowers in the meadow,
Birds singing on the fences,
And we two hand in hand;
There wasn't much money,
And we entertained ourselves
With conversations of dreams
And merging of hopes.

When time found fields of grass
Grown tall and green,
We were building those dreams
Forging the hopes into being,
Turning two to three then four.

When time found leaves of color
Floating on the breeze,
And piling beside the fences,
The four turned back to three
And dreams ended
While hope became a memory
Lost in changing seasons.

When times give me chill
I remember the springtime
The first flowers blooming
And holding your hand.

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

1 posted 2005-05-11 02:52 PM

so sad.

Your metafores remind me of when I was researching haikus. Tis the old times.

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

MyHeartofShadows
Member

since 2004-09-04

Posts 88
Hyattsville, MD

2 posted 2005-05-11 02:56 PM

I find myself stuck in memories, your time responding here in the now help me know that there are others to help me reach the future.

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

3 posted 2005-05-11 03:01 PM

Sometimes it is hard to see that the future is right there, waiting for us to step into it.
This was a touching write, very well written.

MyHeartofShadows
Member

since 2004-09-04

Posts 88
Hyattsville, MD

4 posted 2005-05-11 03:03 PM

Your sweet words are pleasure of the moment, which allows the future to unfold.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2005-05-11 03:11 PM

This touched deeply..a sad write yes..
but, look toward the future now.
You have a home here at Passions too.

So much enjoyed your gently penned words.
Heart hugs~Nancy

Life is one great big canvas;
throw all the paint on it you can.
-Danny Kaye

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