we are like the moon and the sun

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RedStoneEB
Senior Member

since 2003-06-08

Posts 772
uk

0 posted 2005-05-11 05:39 AM

Everywhere is whispered,
promised in the heart-
strangers whom I do not know
shall listen to the harp,
The sorrow of the music plays,
O dance with me my dearest gone-
let us fail to believe in death
and make this moment ours to share.

We are like the moon and the sun,
I bring the warmth to the day-
you bring the cold to the night
never once shall I see you’re face again,
till I join you and we’d be the moon-
high above the world looking down
giving moonlight to those we see around,
till the sun once more shall make us stray;
then we go and share a moment of love.

Immortal be my soul,
that eyes do falsely glance-
but my thoughts be amongst the living
part of memories in the heart,
Comfort lays in knowing not of death;
but of whom you’ll share it with.

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

1 posted 2005-05-11 09:37 AM

beautifully written and so deeply expressed
cherished peace

[This message has been edited by LeeJ (05-11-2005 10:10 AM).]

Startime55
Member Elite

since 2003-04-05

Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada

2 posted 2005-05-11 09:41 AM

Magnificent...I believe that the soul survives physical death so as I read your words I have no problem believing that two who love so much will be united once again...there is longing in your words yet at the same time a comfort of knowing that there is really no end to love...This poem is beautiful to read and feel...

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

3 posted 2005-05-11 10:31 AM

Wonderfully written piece. Much enjoyed.
Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2005-05-11 03:20 PM

Very nicely penned...much enjoyed the read.
Hugs~Nancy

Life is one great big canvas;
throw all the paint on it you can.
-Danny Kaye

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

5 posted 2005-05-11 03:24 PM

Enjoyed this much, nicely done.

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

6 posted 2005-05-11 03:30 PM

quote:
"never once shall I see you’re face again,
till I join you and we’d be the moon-
high above the world looking down
giving moonlight to those we see around,
till the sun once more shall make us stray;
then we go and share a moment of love."

~ I was especially moved by the above lines.

Love & Moon Light,
EA

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