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Kevin1999
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since 2005-05-10
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0 posted 2005-05-10 02:57 PM



Musing in the serene and blissful calm,
of a late summer's eve,
I sip cool white wine,
and gently rock the porch swing.

Listening...intently,
through the dusky silence,

I faintly hear,
The beautiful words you speak to me,
whispered in my ear,
by the warm summer breeze.

Kevin1999 aka Back_alley


© Copyright 2005 Kevin - All Rights Reserved
SEA
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with you
1 posted 2005-05-10 03:16 PM


beautifuuly done
welcome to pip
or is it welcome back?

Susan Caldwell
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2 posted 2005-05-10 03:18 PM


What where the words?

Welcome...

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

Kevin1999
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3 posted 2005-05-10 03:27 PM


It's welcome.  Newbie member.  I posted one other poem under Beenie who gave me permission.
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
4 posted 2005-05-10 03:33 PM


Kevin, that poem will likely be moved to avoid to avoid confusing other new members, as one member is "not allowed" to post another person's work, and from first appearances, that is how it looks to many.

However, you'll be free to repost your first poem under your own name, once the matter can be attended to.  Thank you!

and...

WELCOME TO PASSIONS!

Cloud 9
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5 posted 2005-05-10 03:48 PM


Beautiful.

Welcome!

Martie
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6 posted 2005-05-10 04:50 PM


Kevin....A big welcome to you!!
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
7 posted 2005-05-10 05:19 PM


Excellent write...welcome to Passions!!

Life is one great big canvas;
throw all the paint on it you can.
                    -Danny Kaye

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state of mind
8 posted 2005-05-10 08:10 PM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS
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Bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

scorpio
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right...there
9 posted 2005-05-10 08:17 PM


Welcome to Passions.  I look forward to reading more of your words.

believe in what your heart feels...

froggy
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10 posted 2005-05-15 10:26 PM


Very beautiful.
Welcome to Passions.

:-)

<^^> Today the pond....Tomorrow the world

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just out of reach
11 posted 2005-05-15 10:42 PM


Welcome to the Passion's family.
Enjoyed your first post.
hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

ThisDiamond
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12 posted 2005-05-15 10:50 PM


Enjoyed your first post.
Lovely images.
Welcome to Passions.
ThisDiamond

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13 posted 2005-05-15 10:54 PM


Welcome to Passions.....
beautiful first write....

I came from the mountain
The crust of creation
My whole situtaion-made from clay to stone

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Gaia
14 posted 2005-05-16 01:45 AM


Nice breezy write! Welcome!
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