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D'sWhisper
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since 2003-06-16
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0 posted 2005-05-10 02:51 AM



Your arms aren’t obligated
Friends are over rated
The sincerity has gone
Our connection now wrong
We shared a simple season
Warm and full of reason
But the tide must always creep in
And chase even fantasies to their end

Now I can’t lament, what to feel
When naturally I lose something so real.
My toes burrow deeply in desperation
Trying to stall, this most severe separation
But sand is only glass in smaller pieces
And does not anchor, only cuts and releases

And on the nights, when all is memory
You will cry, when you think of me
Realizing the person you threw away
The chances buried in yesterday.

~How do you lose such an Epic battle? More to the question, how in the world to you continue down the road, when every thing in you wants to dwell in the tears facilitated by every hopeful glance behind you?~

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ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
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1 posted 2005-05-10 09:03 AM


At times dear sister, there is only faith to guide us.  Wishing well all that hurts inside.
Hugs,
TD

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

2 posted 2005-05-10 09:08 AM


How do you lose such an Epic battle? More to the question, how in the world to you continue down the road, when every thing in you wants to dwell in the tears facilitated by every hopeful glance behind you?~


thought provoking, butcha know, maybe, just maybe, that's exactly what it's all about...no loss, but gains...at least, that's what this spoke to me...and let me tell ya...truthfully, and most assuridly...I do look back, for the sake of happiness, for the sake of knowing the gift of love...and yet also realize, we could never have been?

Does that make sense?  

Brilliant poem, gave me reason to stop and be greatful for all the blessings.  

Keeper!!!!

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4 posted 2005-05-10 10:19 AM


"But sand is only glass in smaller pieces
And does not anchor, only cuts and releases"

wishing healing thoughts

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