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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2005-05-09 10:01 AM

guess it was easier afterall
to pull up her hem
and run again

she thought it would be harder
since she was in the water
over her head over heals

and the gown was so long
but she guessed when you are used
to carrying the weight

even when shopping
it is not that big a deal
to hurry it further down a road

to another store front poetry
where they write of missing
and never do enjoy the knowing

that would make their lonely real
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Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

1 posted 2005-05-09 10:15 AM

Oh, this one speaks to me - I hear the behind words -

S

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

2 posted 2005-05-09 10:30 AM

where they write of missing
and never do enjoy the knowing

~this made me smile~ and think

M

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

3 posted 2005-05-09 11:54 AM

to another store front poetry
where they write of missing
and never do enjoy the knowing

that would make their lonely real

I know this, but also know the heartbreak of making the lonely real, for a day, two or three...then, poof, it's over...and the loss is way to much to bear...

thats what this brought to mind...on the other hand...whose to say, the Runaway Bride doesn't have very valid reasons? My son and I were discussing this...

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

4 posted 2005-05-09 06:02 PM

thank you ladies...

just my prozak kickin in

(renamed the black _itch
to prozac..and man is she mad)

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

5 posted 2005-05-12 03:57 AM

You are such a hoot DS! I so love your play on words.
Reminds me of taking a walk on the wild side,
and the low spark of high heeled boys.

Nevertheless, I enjoyed the knowing, and my lonely is real.

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

6 posted 2005-05-12 04:07 AM

  i find your play
   of words
    shimmering~

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

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