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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Rewrite Reasoning Once while I was resting, musing Mugging flowers and juggling clouds Watched a Bee discussing honey Right before his entrance hive Dancing there the weirdest jive Bobbing up and down transcended Till his gorge was near upended Directions to a field of plenty Shallow wiggles, steps and stroll Then disappeared into the hole A throng flew out like piranha Stripping the field of nectars manna Collecting honey just like money Until they cleaned the very source All this without, a touch remorse Struck me odd when in compare to Ways that our humanity fare |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
"Once while I was resting, musing Mugging flowers and juggling clouds Watched a Bee discussing honey Right before his entrance hive Dancing there the weirdest jive Bobbing up and down transcended Till his gorge was near upended" sounds like the Greenwich Village to me.  I thought for a second I had a flashback, but then? when the village was kicking? I think I was like, aged SEVEN.  but yeah, man, I was there....giggle, kicking my brother's shin and saying "Mom wants you home NOW!" (I do tease yanno. But if it gets me hugs?) hey....  and ooh  *chuckle* "mugging flowers" as if you'd haveta! |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Wonderful images Sy. Loved the line of no remorse. The Bees doing God's work. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
thoroughly enjoyed this  |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
A little Poe -etry WEll penned LOve Liz |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
It is the last line that scares me about this race Sy, as it gets worse and worse in this world. You sir, are a walking book of lessons. To Isabel, a Happy Mother's Day! |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
a pleasure this rainy day to know i can come here and always leave with a smile, and warmth and some times a little smarter and wiser thanks sir My spirit will rise |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
you bring out the best in Serenity..did you know that??? ~smiling~ M |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Reasoning: the bees work so hard! While they collect the honey they pollinate all the plants ... if humans were as unselfish as bees we would surely have a better distribution of the world's goods ... Thank you dear Seymour for the bee-reflection! Have a wonderful Sunday! Love and hugs. Margherita |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
serenity, No doubt about it you are a sweet heart. scorpio Thank you my friend. SEA Glad you enjoyed. Elizabeth Love back and glad you are feeling well. Sharon, You are a love. MGROVES Always a pleasure to have you read my humble poetry. Maureen, No I didn't know that. Hugs Margherita, You are a sweety, love and hugs back. |
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