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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Lace Delicate as a piece of lace Over satins covers embrace A white rose above the thistle I uttered a sexy whistle Flowing hair within the breeze Enough to bring a heart a tease Eyes that melted you in blue That seemed to wink a wink at you A radiation blazed the green A phantom midst a lovely scene A spirit standing in the glow Desire brought to shape it so And as I reached to touch the vision This masterpiece of precision A gentle shake a wake to light That sent the vision back to night It’s time to go to work my dove I brought her close and kissed my love |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
this has sigh/Sey written all over it. Well done sir Sey.... |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
a little playfully risque today, are we not...smiles and hugs...what nice images do creep up and take residence... very very lovely! Morning Mr. Contagious smiles...loved this |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
"It's time to go to work my love" mmm hmmm... methinks I'd be whispering the same thing!  lovely cuddly seymour...you leave sighs behind your poetry like the tide leaves shells.  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Good morning dear "SIGH" Tabin! Well these are the most lovely of words to awaken the reader this fine morn. Lovely lovely...oooh yessss. ~Sending doves with hugs your way~ Life is one great big canvas; |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, yes! Those are the sort of sweet sonneteering words that I have missed while I have been away! There is magic in those fingers! ~ on the keyboard! (and elsewhere I'm sure!)  Love, A Fan xo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this sure brought a smile |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Well just look at this swoon set to rhyme... my goodness..me thinks I have the vapors...lol A white rose above the thistle I uttered a sexy whistle Randy said to tell you he takes the credit for those lines...LOL *ww*   |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Gentle, Glad you recognized the style. LOL LeeJ, Loved your comment. Thank you. serenity, Hello beautiful, thank you for the hug. Nancy, Thank you for the lovely. Earth Angel, Sending you a But if I was there I would do it in person.passing, Love when you smile. JM, Vapor o'er the paper. LOL Love ya Tink |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I thought I heard someone whistling!    |
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adagio Member
since 2005-03-19
Posts 449Marrero, La. |
Such talent as shown here is rare, yet well done. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine That was me. adagio Once again, thank you much. |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
 My spirit will rise |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
MGROVES Thank you for the read. |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
came back and read again~ we seemed to have had a vision of the same~ i did not know what to say earlier My spirit will rise |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Seymour, what a delightfully beautiful and romantic poem this is!! Can you tell that I love it?? LOL Hugs, sweet SighSey!! Ethel |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
MGROVES The smile said it all. Ethel, Yes but I like to hear it. LOL |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
heard the whistle too My spirit will rise |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
MGROVES That must hae been some whistle. LOL |
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