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Music Avenue
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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Music Avenue Neighboring thought present, approaching playwright’s hand bringing existence Streams of similarity Melodious intensity Profound Fascinated streetlights reproduce Pouring like fall leaves golden breathtaking colors Spirit reshapes as a fountain pours… tenderness Perhaps at times, emptier and a little more spent But…alas To this acceleration, clearly yielding the secret place Submersible love Immersed Life our universal hues life-giving womb Offering praises of promise Gratitude Only a single gesture would suffice We pass thoughts, unspoken… Stop and listen Tones of beauteous authority delicately embroidered within our fabric of moment Time, time…. To all spiritual decrees Submittal Acceptance Ermine of our dreams Lighted gems of hope spawn from memory Transformed like the splash of aqua blue seas imbued on canvas Graceful strokes… Thick and alive epic of pearls, a union Richer for the experience Supple without selfishness, to the blessings of freedom’s affection We are passion’s lovers twined within a patio of Athens Clear eyes fashioned, gentle moons smiling Tapping into intricate meanings of such never before perceived Contaminate me with this complacent nod What mileage concertos the echoes of Gods? A social voice identity matching generations Of influence, by which impulses and inhabits His methods Saturating energy, yet, no one seems to want to hear This heart jewel shining, clearest brightest blue And within this miracle, I listen to the fragrace of you Your voice, trusted, here we are, in our souls again Oh for the experience There we become free, when we free all else As a dew drop smiles on a certainty which never ends All history within a crystal sea of silence Dissolving blissful nectar, we are a miracle On music avenue |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"All history within a crystal sea of silence" ~ I had a hard time choosing my favourite lines! ~ They were all wonderfully rich and intoxicating! May all your roads in life be filled with such music!   Linda |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Saturating energy, yet, no one seems to want to hear This heart jewel shining, clearest brightest blue And within this miracle, I listen to the fragrace of you Your voice, trusted, here we are, in our souls again Oh for the experience I like this very much, Lee... you took me down many avenues with this great write! *S* |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
There we become free, when we free all else As a dew drop smiles on a certainty which never ends This kind of freedom is a most beautiful tune! Wonderful "Music Avenue"! Love, Margherita  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you always write where many people can pick out different lines they like I like to see what strikes people, by what they quote |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"As a dew drop smiles on a certainty which never ends All history within a crystal sea of silence Dissolving blissful nectar, we are a miracle On music avenue" . I think I've been there too. Great write Lee J. JL |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Another great write from your magical pen Lee. Well done! In the midst of winter, |
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