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SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

0 posted 2005-05-07 02:52 AM

He asked me when~
when do I love him
most...

It’s when I hear the smile
there in your hello
when the laughter
finds its way to your eyes
and the joke remains
private
and others look at us
wishing they understood

It’s when your touch speaks to me
more eloquently than any poetry
ever recited
and shares with me the secrets
of your heart, you’ve never spoken

It’s when your arms
find their way around me
and I become completed and whole
and make me feel as if I can finally
breathe...

It’s when your kiss knows
exactly where I need it to be
at exactly the right time
causing all my thoughts
to be still
and allow me that moment
of nothing except
me and you

that’s when

~SEA~

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

1 posted 2005-05-07 03:24 AM

I loved this Sea...Love is best when it is simple....we try to make love more than what it really is...it is the small, but valuable everyday expressions of love that matters the most...and you have expressed it well!

~ARh

"Let me not to the marriage of true minds
Admit impediments; love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2005-05-07 09:16 AM

precious you

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2005-05-07 09:26 AM

This is so pure and beautiful Sue.
Love the opening soft whisper..
followed by the whispered ending.
Have a very happy Mother'a day.

Life is one great big canvas;
throw all the paint on it you can.
-Danny Kaye

HopeS
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

4 posted 2005-05-07 09:26 AM

Those special moments and understanding so beautifully expressed ....

Hope

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

5 posted 2005-05-07 10:28 AM

Bravo Susan, exceptional romance poetry.

Startime55
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since 2003-04-05

Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada

6 posted 2005-05-07 10:49 AM

Oh yes, indeed that is WHEN!!! How very perfectly you write of the tender romance you feel...I absolutely love it...**hugs**

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

7 posted 2005-05-07 12:33 PM

SEA~

Breathtakingly beautiful ... sighing here~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

Email noles1@totcon.com

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

8 posted 2005-05-07 12:37 PM

That's when, yes!

Those precious, priceless moments when everything becomes LOVE.

This is indeed very beautiful!

Love, Margherita

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

9 posted 2005-05-07 01:50 PM

It is when the tide collides
with the shore
and sea
spray
melts
with toes
that sink deeply between
sand salt.

A wet, pure portrait
is reflected
in the dying Sun
as the final day
rests itself
upon weary shoulders
of two souls
bound
eternal . . .

Susan . . . that was beautiful.

Aenimal
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since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

10 posted 2005-05-07 04:08 PM

aw..you so pretty when your l#ve is showin. a lucky man, your husband. 'specially considering some of those writes in the mature section..grins

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

11 posted 2005-05-07 04:14 PM

thank you, thank you, thank you guys so much...
Sue? Loved that reply...beautiful

and Raph you are adored...

thank you

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

12 posted 2005-05-09 10:57 AM

suesea...enjoyed this soft woman
with handles for holding heart
D

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

13 posted 2005-05-09 02:25 PM

It appears to me that you have found a man worthy of your love...

Softly sentimental and loving.

EA

quote:
“We are born of star dust ~
and to the stars we shall one day return.”
~ Linda L. Dowd

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

14 posted 2005-05-09 02:32 PM

All of those whens...
leaving such a quiet ripple...

Lovely, Susan...

Cloud 9
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since 2004-11-05

Posts 980
Ca

15 posted 2005-05-09 02:44 PM

I love this feeling.

Excellent!

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

16 posted 2005-05-09 09:38 PM

Enjoyed....James

SmartChick
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since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

17 posted 2005-05-09 10:14 PM

Wow Sea! You always did know how to write such beautiful poetry. And, this is no exception. Just beautiful.

ESP
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since 2000-01-25

Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....

18 posted 2005-05-10 07:26 AM

Gorgeous!! Sigh...

"Time has told me not to ask for more, one day our ocean will find its shore" ~Nick Drake

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

19 posted 2005-05-10 08:00 AM

you've perfectly described the imperfections that become great miracles..., those moments that are priceless and forgotten, until they are no longer there..

wonderful painting

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

20 posted 2005-05-10 02:36 PM

this is soft and billowy - like a love floating cloud - wonderful

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

21 posted 2005-05-10 02:41 PM

omg Sea, this is so soft and beautiful.....

and perfect.

D.Lester Young
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since 2001-12-08

Posts 1219
Austin, Tx

22 posted 2005-05-10 02:45 PM

Now that is poetic coupling!! Excellent!

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

23 posted 2005-05-10 10:16 PM

Sheesh! Some people will do anything for tinted windows

Just kidding, beatifully soft, like that side of you he saw that he loved I am sure.

~* Let's spend less time worrying when our life's going to end, and more on when it's going to start *~

MGROVES

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since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

24 posted 2005-05-12 04:02 AM

precious love

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

25 posted 2005-05-15 06:44 PM

Ahh SEA, you make me sigh. Beautiful this, just like you.

Mxx

"we all have wings, but some of us don't know why"

Michael Hutchence (INXS)

Local Rebel
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-21

Posts 5767
Southern Abstentia

26 posted 2005-05-15 07:36 PM

he should ask you more questions!

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

27 posted 2005-05-16 06:54 PM

wow susan, yes, thats when......

I came from the mountain
The crust of creation
My whole situtaion-made from clay to stone

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

28 posted 2005-05-16 07:58 PM

Is there a line one can get into to be loved like that? And what does it cost to go to the head of the line?

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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