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exhale
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0 posted 2005-05-06 11:38 PM


she wants to cry
if only to feel empty
and too know that being human
is feeling,
just feeling.

she knows
she knows that coming from
a broken family
doesn't create a broken person
but she still feels disconected
she's need the switch flipped.

to learn from the past
without
without being defined by it
is a challenge,
it was always her challenge
and she's grown to know it.

what her family has given her
wasn't just
a loss of self
but the realization of a new one
and the chance to embrace
what she's never had.

a broken family
does not create
a broken person.

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A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
1 posted 2005-05-07 03:19 AM


Hugs to you exhale~
Feeling this...

~ARH

"Let me not to the marriage of true minds
Admit impediments; love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to

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with you
2 posted 2005-05-07 03:23 AM


it doesn't... this is so great...and maybe it's not so much broken as it is changed
passing shadows
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3 posted 2005-05-07 09:20 AM


a good piece here

thanks for the thoughts

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