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Open Poetry #35

A Springtime Cold...

Tim
Senior Member

since 1999-06-08

Posts 1794

0 posted 2005-05-06 12:05 PM

It has been told
About a cold,
That he once caught,
Its germs he fought,
To no avail,
He felt like hail,
He coughed and sneezed,
Sick and diseased,
To near exhaust
His battle lost,
Drip, drip, drip,
Down on his lip,
Infernal dripping,
Life force slipping,
Aching head,
Wished he was dead,
But he was not,
Just full of snot,
Nice and thick,
Now that is sick,
I don’t mean him,
Instead mean Tim
(that's me
you see)
For being gross,
Well adios.
Achoo
Adieu.

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

1 posted 2005-05-06 12:54 PM

Me thinks you have had too much cold medicine

Cute write, get well soon.

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

2 posted 2005-05-06 11:49 AM

take a shot of something with tea...heavily vicks your chest, pin a towel over it, drink gobs of water, no starches or sugar, and get well soon.

Funny, this poem, enjoyed!

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2005-05-06 12:01 PM

THAT flu?
AcHOOO...
boo-hoo
me had it too...
it don't get better,
but you won't die...
and it's not quite yet
a stick in the eye...

[P.S. - for that congestion? Rx Mucinex...]

Get better soon, Sir!

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2005-05-06 12:44 PM

Oh my!! I do hope you feel better soon!!
~Distant hugs..I don't want to catch it, Nancy~

Life is one great big canvas;
throw all the paint on it you can.
-Danny Kaye

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2005-05-06 07:20 PM

relating well

just got over mine after four days

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

6 posted 2005-05-06 07:23 PM

Awwww I'm sorry you're sick. Hope you get well, soon.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

7 posted 2005-05-07 09:33 AM

You sure it's not an allergy?

This is a cute write, haha funny too, but not for you!

Dear Tim, may you be well quickly.

Love, Margherita

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