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Magnus
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0 posted 2005-05-06 04:58 PM


Held gently,
a tarnished bit of stamped brass,
owned by one, given unselfishly to one.

Smooth, the edge...awaiting a moment
when...

A palm opens and a gift of souls is
entrusted and given away.

That which is sacredly, tenderly held,
beyond life...into a realm far beyond.

A key...

© Copyright 2005 Barry J. Tackett - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2005-05-06 06:19 PM


My dear poet, you are a man who holds many a key!!!

Loveya!
Linda

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2 posted 2005-05-06 06:41 PM


beautiful
Margherita
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3 posted 2005-05-07 09:43 AM


... given unselfishly ...

Precious poem about a priceless gift, dear Barry!

Love, Margherita


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4 posted 2005-05-07 09:52 AM


WOW!!! A stunning poem that with but a few words is filled with such passion and magic....What a way to start my visit...Bravo, my friend...You words remain filled with what makes you a wonderful man....

Magnus
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5 posted 2005-05-07 09:55 AM


Thank You Karen,  you have been missed, but
never forgotten...

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Listening to every heart
6 posted 2005-05-07 10:01 AM


A gift such as this
is always key...

Well done, Sir.

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7 posted 2005-05-10 05:41 PM


Lovely writing Barry.  
MGROVES
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8 posted 2005-05-12 05:24 AM


always love the music that flows
from your pen~

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

LeeJ
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9 posted 2005-05-12 07:03 AM


most elegant and well said...you, are a peach!  lovely smiles and warmth, becomes the reader...thank you
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