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Goodknight
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since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386
Ohio, USA

0 posted 2005-05-31 07:30 PM


Redefining normal
To what for what do we seek
Life pauses in derision
Asking one to speak
Speaking done over many ago
Aching minds
Running to and fro
Wondering where to run
Lost a definition of fun
Just get by
Life is that way
Cynic or clinic
Hard for one to say
What is what was
What will
…never known
What is must be
Life is not free


© Copyright 2005 Paul Tofte - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
1 posted 2005-05-31 07:35 PM


"What is what was
What will
…never known
What is must be
Life is not free"

Hi Paul!!!  Excellent write that rings true.
It's SO good to see you posting again!!!
~Big Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

iliana
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since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
2 posted 2005-05-31 08:09 PM


Hi, Paul.  Good write.  Know exactly what you mean.  I feel that way sometimes, too.   ....jo
Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049
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3 posted 2005-05-31 08:25 PM


Paul..it is really good to see a poem from you!!!  I love the way you are always thinking things through.

"Life is that way
Cynic or clinic"

yes, sometimes this is so true!



miscellanea
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since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060
OH
4 posted 2005-05-31 09:03 PM


I was looking for something to smile about tonight and here it is!  A poem from Ohio's Goodknight!  And not just a poem, but a very articulate one about something many of us feel.  Your title describes my mood so well tonight.  But hey, chin up, right?  Sometimes easier said than done!

I look forward to hearing from you again.
Take care, Paul.
                cathy

Goodknight
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Ohio, USA
5 posted 2005-06-03 05:25 PM


thanks to you all for reading and saying - Paul
passing shadows
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displaced
6 posted 2005-06-08 08:31 AM


I missed this earlier

good to see you again Paul

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