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Ericc
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0 posted 2005-05-06 03:15 PM



From my lips...

The night is torn by the
whisper of your name.

Two sides of infinity.

Distance.

And my longing to be
near you.



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A Romantic Heart
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1 posted 2005-05-06 03:33 PM


Passionate...I like it!

~ARh

"Let me not to the marriage of true minds
Admit impediments; love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to

passing shadows
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2 posted 2005-05-06 07:06 PM


you said it just perfectly
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with you
3 posted 2005-05-07 02:35 AM


how do you do that?!

*sigh*
amazing....

GG
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4 posted 2005-05-07 07:37 AM


Ohh it's just perfect!!

I've gotta ask the same thing...
how do you do this?!

Very well done.

Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
5 posted 2005-05-07 09:37 AM


Beautiful Eric!!!

Life is one great big canvas;
throw all the paint on it you can.
                    -Danny Kaye

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6 posted 2005-05-07 10:26 AM


Superb is a meager statement....
Startime55
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7 posted 2005-05-07 10:28 AM


Your longing and desire can be heard in a loud whisper torn from your heart...A powerful poem filled with love...

Margherita
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8 posted 2005-05-07 10:42 AM


From my lips...

The night is torn by the
whisper of your name.

Two sides of infinity.

Distance.

And my longing to be
near you.



Dawn is delighted
to brush your cheeks

interpreting eagerly
the secrets of your night

and carrying them to Zenith
for all to behold

you are the gift, you see,
for you are Love personified!

*  *  *


What you long for longs for you!
Another gem, dear Eric!

I love you,
Margherita

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9 posted 2005-06-19 02:43 AM


"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." A. Brink


HopeS
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10 posted 2005-06-19 05:16 AM


beautiful expressed sentiments

Hope

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11 posted 2005-06-19 10:19 AM


As night is the shadow of day, both sides mirror the light of love.

Superb!
TD

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12 posted 2005-06-19 10:37 AM


this is just amazing Ericc....passion flowing...

I keep a fragrance bottle my
muse gave me when I met him
in endless winter and he
settled me into remembering
who I am.

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13 posted 2005-06-19 11:27 AM


Ericc,

I love your writing. You are so profound, your words are silk on paper.

SG

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14 posted 2005-06-19 12:05 PM


Eric...your touch has not waned.  Superb!
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