Open Poetry #35 |
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Two Sides |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
From my lips... The night is torn by the whisper of your name. Two sides of infinity. Distance. And my longing to be near you. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Passionate...I like it! ~ARh "Let me not to the marriage of true minds |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you said it just perfectly |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
how do you do that?! *sigh* amazing.... ![]() |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Ohh it's just perfect!! I've gotta ask the same thing... how do you do this?! Very well done. Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Eric!!! Life is one great big canvas; |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Superb is a meager statement.... |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Your longing and desire can be heard in a loud whisper torn from your heart...A powerful poem filled with love... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
From my lips... The night is torn by the whisper of your name. Two sides of infinity. Distance. And my longing to be near you. Dawn is delighted to brush your cheeks interpreting eagerly the secrets of your night and carrying them to Zenith for all to behold you are the gift, you see, for you are Love personified! * * * What you long for longs for you! Another gem, dear Eric! I love you, Margherita ![]() |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
![]() "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." A. Brink |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
beautiful expressed sentiments Hope |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
As night is the shadow of day, both sides mirror the light of love. Superb! TD |
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Greeneyes![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
this is just amazing Ericc....passion flowing... I keep a fragrance bottle my |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Ericc, I love your writing. You are so profound, your words are silk on paper. SG |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Eric...your touch has not waned. Superb! |
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