Open Poetry #35 |
You and I |
CastleGuard Senior Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 760Alberta, Canada |
My soul was born to live for yours, my Love, before I knew yours even existed, and now my soul dances with yours, for there is no other way of being — I love you as the sunrise meets the day, they twain are - yet are the same; I love you naturally, as the rain falls to the ground with no need for cause or direction — You always were within me, without me knowing your face - yet I heard your laughter, and felt your tears bedew the wild field of my heart then you dropped your anchor into its untilled soil and I caught you free-falling from the heavens — — a gift from the gods, I think. CG |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
WOW! A gift from the GODS...Loved that line...loved all of it! ~ Love and hugs ~ARh "Let me not to the marriage of true minds |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
romantic and beautiful |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
beautiful!!!! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
My goodness! I think YOU are a gift from the gods! ~ No, you ARE a god, dear Eros! CG, this poem of love is divinely beautiful and sweetly soul-touching! Love & Heaven Light, EA |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
"yet I heard your laughter, and felt your tears bedew the wild field of my heart then you dropped your anchor into its untilled soil and I caught you free-falling from the heavens — " very very romantiuc and love the imagery....what a nice thought! To be appreciated like that - caught me with the first line and sealed it with the last good stuff |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice....James |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
beautiful: My spirit will rise |
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