Open Poetry #35 |
silk of tides |
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
street lights behind the blind man's eyes as he reads the rain with his face fingers saying the lines with mouthfull overflow like an ocean without ears or the time to know the music that it can't feel when the black rocks pierce the fragile silk of tides entwined to give their lives to some sacrificial sand laying prostrate before it's god waiting to become the golden glass that paves the streets of heaven with visions from a blind man's eyes _______________ Dark |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Should have been part of the sooth series... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
love it Dark |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Baby - com'mon inside where it's dry and warm - where there is a view even for the blind - Susan If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
very intensly written...and felt...and yes, I'm with Susan...listen to her music....smiles and hugs |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thank you ladies for your eyes lee j..ok..you talked me into it ..susan move over clover cause big bird is coming over |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS "to some sacrificial sand laying prostrate before it's god waiting to become the golden glass that paves the streets of heaven with visions from a blind man's eyes" Beautiful! |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
you could roll me over in the clover lie me down and do it again i liked your whispers too! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
as he reads the rain with his face fingers I love this image. *S* Beautiful, flowing work! |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Sweet as honey, flowing down a stream... ~ARh We attract hearts by the qualities we display, we retain them by the qualities we possess.~Jean Baptiste Antoine Suard |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
your visions are the bridge to the other side |
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