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Open Poetry #35

life as it is.

exhale
Senior Member

since 2003-06-13

Posts 646
Alberta,Canada

0 posted 2005-05-05 09:04 PM

so this is what it's like
to cry till i'm empty
and put it all in a cup
for you to drink up
because it's life
and you need it to feel alive
everyone does.

driving down this same road
the one i swear i drove on
last year
deja vu
and i feel like ripping my hair out
because i'm come full circle
and you have't moved.

right now..
right now
i wish these words meant more
my life screams mediocre
that's not life
that's not living

is it possible
to have all the friends in the world
and not one.

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

1 posted 2005-05-05 09:57 PM

Sometimes life seems empty .... it's our job to fill it up. Just enjoy !! We will be your friends.

hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

Kevo
Member

since 2004-06-02

Posts 466
Navarro County, Texas, USA

2 posted 2005-05-06 12:57 PM

Great write! And, one I can identify with. Sometimes you feel deserted. On your own little island - no one understands. I've been there. You conveyed that feeling wonderfully. Cheers to you. You're writing exquisitely well!

Kevin

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2005-05-06 07:47 PM

I understand this one well

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

4 posted 2005-05-09 05:03 PM

This is painful... it's honest... and it's excellent!!!

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

5 posted 2005-05-09 05:08 PM

Chelsea, an excellent write!

Could feel every word.

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