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ThisDiamond
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0 posted 2005-05-05 08:48 PM



Sweet the flavor of your presence in my heart
As ribbons in the wind of autumn's scrimmage
Vast the farthest reaches blend a muted image  
Oh, the possibilities left open and times two
Rendered in a spectacle of truth and trust I do
Each and every moment fills in thoughts of you
Darling, of my fortune you are most precious

Copyright Kkh 05/05/05

[This message has been edited by ThisDiamond (05-05-2005 10:48 PM).]

© Copyright 2005 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
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just out of reach
1 posted 2005-05-05 09:54 PM


Lovely indeed TD. Hugging you. Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

marcel
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az, usa
2 posted 2005-05-05 10:44 PM


Beautiful and precious is this piece!
Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
3 posted 2005-05-05 11:53 PM



Flowers

B eautiful
R omantic
A ffectionate
V aliant
A doring


Linda

BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
4 posted 2005-05-06 01:27 AM


Sweet the flavor of your presence in my heart
As ribbons in the wind of autumn's scrimmage

Your thoughts are so pretty, Kathleen.  I'm sitting here backspacing,
starring at the screen and smiling at you.

Sometimes I just don't know what to say~
I just hope that you know how much I love reading you.

Ericc
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5 posted 2005-05-06 02:57 PM


Awe-some!

Eric

passing shadows
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6 posted 2005-05-06 07:08 PM


and I savored this write
inkedgoddess
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7 posted 2005-05-06 07:12 PM


your words are woven from the finest cloth
as always

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