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Corinne
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0 posted 2005-05-05 08:02 PM


Catch


-ing the twenty-two,

f
a
l
l
ing now,

I’m, can you --

this year’s flu?


today’s fish =

tomorrow’s

release.

© Copyright 2005 Corinne - All Rights Reserved
wranx
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1 posted 2005-05-05 08:09 PM


Hi Cor....

It may be my rusty ol' brainpan

But, methinks this isn't about catch and release fishing...or the flu

But then? I ain't the sharpest marble in the bag.

Aenimal
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2 posted 2005-05-05 09:26 PM


an interesting departure, hmmm..heller's damned if you do damned if you don't..is the fish a person it's time to let go of? nice write this
Corinne
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3 posted 2005-05-05 11:15 PM


Thanks guys,

heh, this is going to be a miss, I think.

Catch phrases, kind of thing

catch me I'm falling
catch the flu, etc.

Corinne

Aenimal
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4 posted 2005-05-06 01:30 AM


d'oh!
Earth Angel
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5 posted 2005-05-06 01:35 AM


Well, I would most certainly catch you if you were falling! I'd even risk catching the flu!

Loves 'n hugs,
Linda

passing shadows
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6 posted 2005-05-06 07:30 AM


neat
wandering glider
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7 posted 2005-05-06 09:38 AM


aaachoooooo!
Sunshine
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8 posted 2005-05-06 09:39 AM



Ahem.  A "catchy" play on words, m'dear!

Corinne
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9 posted 2005-05-07 03:56 PM


Ack! Thanks guys, for puttin' up with this little experiment. Kind of an embarassing one, but you know, I guess that's why they call it experimenting! heh




Corinne

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