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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
I dream a little dream of you laying in your bed holding your pillow too a smile so sweet upon your face I pull my pillow closer as if you I embrace i had an image to go with this but i could not get it on page right sorry it make the little poem better i shall keep trying with the images |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
it's still precious even without the image |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
long as you have the image in your thoughts it is there enjoyed this ms |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
the image reached out and touched me...I think you did more then fine... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Marsha, pillows know the greatest secrets! This is very lovely. Love, Margherita |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You created the image so clearly with your words that I actually thought I saw the image with my eyes!  Good to read you again!  EA |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Nice write.  ~Alli~ *AIM = Alli4000* Journal! |
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