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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2005-05-05 07:11 AM


proper pale parchment
with a rose sinned
above the volumpt
not yet eyed with ink

I day dreamed in the night
of such a poetry
open paged to my eyes
with just the right words

that were a fix for my need
but were free of tender
yet tender offered
along with the hands

to turn the rhymes
of a lady to a woman
without abrige
but yet a river that streams

to whisper across my fingers

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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
1 posted 2005-05-05 07:20 AM



I believe you are singlehandedly
recreating the land of this realm's
milk and honey...

Eureka!

I think you've found it...

LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

2 posted 2005-05-05 07:57 AM


a social matrix you conspire, to inspire, from the dreams of depth, touching nature's soul...with the woman, not only by your side, but inside, your core, heart and mind...unabridged...the very constant

Shhhh, Listen...you hear life, in all that is...

another wonder by you...brings smiles to the window of morning

SEA
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Member Seraphic
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with you
3 posted 2005-05-05 09:24 AM


"I day dreamed in the night
of such a poetry
open paged to my eyes
with just the right words"

always you present a feast for my eyes this is awesome

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348
Florida
4 posted 2005-05-05 12:25 PM


"I day dreamed in the night
of such a poetry
open paged to my eyes
with just the right words"

understanding just out of reach...that is what this reminds me of...

well done Mr. D.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
5 posted 2005-05-05 01:03 PM


very nice
Martie
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California
6 posted 2005-05-05 01:24 PM


DS

"I day dreamed in the night
of such a poetry
open paged to my eyes
with just the right words"

Me too!  

MGROVES
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california
7 posted 2005-05-07 08:54 AM




  you have a way with words~
    

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

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