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Impasse
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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I'd write something pretty to brighten my day but these ominous clouds stand in the way I see slivers of light tis surely a sign but the sun holds steadfast in it's refusal to shine It is dark here and I am afraid that my own sanity slowly does fade please, oh please don't ask me to smile excuse me for a little while Through this darkness, oh so vast here I'm held, in this impasse I really want to care, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Gentle, All impasses pass.  |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
thanks Sey guy.  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sending heart hugs your way sweet lady.. This too shall pass. Hope all is well. ~Love ya lady~ Life is one great big canvas; |
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WindWalker Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218 |
I like the imagery in this well crafted poem! |
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WindWalker Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218 |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Nancy, thanks. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Windwalker, thank you |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
ahhh, there you are, where have you been? I'd write something pretty to brighten my day but these ominous clouds stand in the way Sheesh, you underestimate yourself...way to much, for always do you leave the reader of your delightful poety to ponder many things...reading you is like visiting an outdoor musikfest... Tell me...will you be playing in the Allentown area of PA soon? Well if not, you should be soon, they don't know what they're missing. Outstanding write! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
lol....Allentown really isnt that far from where I am here... hmmmm...I NEED a vacation ....lol... Thanks Lee. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I couldn't have written it better myself dang, do I understand! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
well, then, come on up for Musikfest, which is really in Bethlehem, runs for 7 days, fireworks, live entertainment, bands of all ethniticities all over the place, good food, lotsa beer gardens...and a just plain festive spirit. take a looksee http://www.musikfest.org/ heck, you gotta place to stay |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah, but it is shining now, right?   |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"I see slivers of light tis surely a sign" yes, that it's still there. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Come to Oz Bella Donna, i'll take ya to the wizard heh  Hope you're ok, Mxx "we all have wings, but some of us don't know why" |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
The natural process of "things" can not be forced, likewise there are days we just don't feel like smiling. It's a woman's prerogative, but she can always change her mind. Hugs, sweetie~ |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Ladies, you are precious and touch my heart. Thank you each. |
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