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Scarlet Tears |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States 
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Scarlet Tears By Paul Wilson I need someone too make me laugh cause it feels better than crying I'd rather have a smile on my face than too watch myself slowly dying Scarlet teardrops leave their stains on this broken heart inside of me I was always there for you but you were never there for me Sands of time begin their last spiral downwards into regret My heart still aches for you but I curse the day we met They say time heals all wounds but nothing heals a broken heart The end of me has just begun today my world was torn apart Reflections in the mirror shows the sadness within my heart I wonder if time will wait for me and let me make a new start You said I was all washed up that you and I were through I should have seen it coming but didn't have a clue The day is almost over so we hit a couple of bars We'll have a drink or two and forget about being soap opera stars ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ Paul |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I know the feelings, Paul keep writing it out, it helps |
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PouringJewels Member
since 2003-09-18
Posts 158Maryland |
"Today my world was torn apart" but tomarrow will bring you new and wonderful caves to explore. |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Passing Shadows...Please read the last stanza again, this poem is just a little dark humor that came too me about the dual lives of soap stars that they play everyday....Paul Thanks for caring...Paul pouring jewels...Sorry if I confused you. This was just a little dark humor from me. Thank you for reading all the same...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I was near tears for your pain until I came to the last stanza. Then I chuckled with relief!  Yer a character, Pauly! lol  Linda |
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WindWalker Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218 |
I chuckled to when I read the last stanza; I love the word crafting in this poem! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
a play on words, as is the play on our lives...well done, enjoyed |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
I stopped watching soaps when they cloned Rita... *shrug* I just ain't buyin' it.  nice write."too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Linda...Glad I could change your tears into laughter. Thanks for reading and your caring reply...Paul WindWalker...Glad you enjoyed this. Thanks for the reply...Paul Lee J...I really don't see how those soap stars can seperate themselves from their professional life and their real lives. Thanks for the reply...Paul Susan...They do so many really strange things on soaps,I don't know how anyone can keep up with it. I really appreciate you reply...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
excellent use of wording Paul, very well done. |
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