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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia 
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could be gone opportunity scattered to dust and settled back to earth again still you smile at me and I know it's invitation to places not been in a long time disaster it's delightful your smile and your engaging places and it makes me feel yeah that it makes me feel but I can't get there from here |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hawk "it makes me feel but I can't get there from here" Too bad! A lot of life is just roads to places we can't go to but wish we could. Enjoyed this alot!  |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This brings to mind a favored Steven Wright quote: "You can't have everything. Where would you put it?" (and nod, I can think of at least one place...blushing wicked) You are a craving unto yourself, Reb.   |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
quote: Gosh... This just speaks so many things to me, and I hafta say I LOVE IT !! Always have loved your pen, and your mind !!  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I reckon road blocks are put up for reasons |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
and it makes me feel yeah that ~*~ yeah. That.  The thought of feel, alone is poem enough. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
the feel of this poem is just yeah, that... yeah, that.... and very well done! |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"and it makes me feel yeah that it makes me feel but I can't get there from here" yes you can...if you can feel it then you can get there.  beautiful, sad words. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Guess you knew you'd get a lot of "yeah that's" in your replies, huh? Anyway, love the simplicity of this and how you never really say anything and yet you say so much. Leaves it open for all of us to think about this situation in our own lives. Very cool. Well done. Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Oh my, I so love the feelings you wrote. This is rich, Reb!! (and that's no joke) |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
disaster it's delightful'' you can always get there from here.... nicely said! I don’t mind spending everyday |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
it makes me feel but I can't get there from here But you must, my friend... no matter how great the detour... for if such destination is out of reach, what's the use? *S* Hmmmm... how dare you go and make me think... knowing I'm blonde... tis very unfair to your aging auntie. *G* But even such a burden can't keep me from liking this tremendously. *G* |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
it makes me feel... ..yes. and i love that feeling. Hugs...awesome post. Life is one great big canvas; throw all the paint on it you can. -Danny Kaye |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
yes, and it makes me feel stimulating poem, all the way through I don't know how to say in words, how this spoke volumns.... |
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adagio Member
since 2005-03-19
Posts 449Marrero, La. |
" IT makes me feel" Thats the work of a poet. I was told once to tell how I feel, but better I thought to make others feel. thats what you have done here. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
its not the obstacle, but the want to get over it that's the key. l#ved the write Reb |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I believe those obstacles are nothing more than an alternate way of gently saying please, please....  loved the intimacy of this |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
As they say, "Where there's a will ~ there's a way!" Good to read you again, Dear Rebel With A Cause! Linda |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Hi LR~ I read this a while back when I wasn't feeling like my old self. But I wanted you to know I truly enjoyed your forthcoming approach as well as the honesty and sincerity in which you wrote this. Be it a real life situation or not, it makes one feel. And that to me is what appeals. So lets give it another go 'round~ even if we can't get there it's so worth the read. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
I especially liked the tartness of your recipe. TD |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
you just have that 'swoon' technique down pat don't you? it oozes from every pore and out your pen great write good reading you again |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
I LOVE this Reb and oddly enough it put the Stones in my head this morning: "I saw herr to-dayy at theee re-ceppptionnn . . . a glass of winnne in herr haannddd . . ." |
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