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Magnus
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0 posted 2005-05-03 03:55 PM


Dawn splinters the twins of night’s recluse,
casting a lingering spell beyond the vine of
bramble’s reach, Alluring, this still darkness
which captures all, leaving a cascade of
flowery scented messengers.

Brace not the clasp of tendrils,   for comfort
rides the willow’s bow.  Fret not the quiet
of a dawning....evermore will be gift that
rests beyond the flicker of a mantle’s brow.

And when the lily spawns beneath the
savior fern....a sigh shall awaken again
the night...before the traveler’s rest
awakes in cloak of dew...

© Copyright 2005 Barry J. Tackett - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2005-05-03 04:03 PM


many good lines here

lovely write Barry
much enjoyed

Margherita
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2 posted 2005-05-03 04:19 PM


Very very beautiful, dear Barry!

You truly see with the heart.

Love, Margherita

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3 posted 2005-05-03 04:30 PM


A beautiful write here Barry!
Very very much enjoyed the read.
Hugs~Nancy

Life is one great big canvas;
throw all the paint on it you can.
                    -Danny Kaye

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4 posted 2005-05-03 04:54 PM


In agreement with my sister Enchantress. Wonderful Magnus my friend. hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

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5 posted 2005-05-03 05:32 PM


Barry,
Well done, enjoyed the read.

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