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Open Poetry #35

Willow's Bow

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2005-05-03 03:55 PM

Dawn splinters the twins of night’s recluse,
casting a lingering spell beyond the vine of
bramble’s reach, Alluring, this still darkness
which captures all, leaving a cascade of
flowery scented messengers.

Brace not the clasp of tendrils, for comfort
rides the willow’s bow. Fret not the quiet
of a dawning....evermore will be gift that
rests beyond the flicker of a mantle’s brow.

And when the lily spawns beneath the
savior fern....a sigh shall awaken again
the night...before the traveler’s rest
awakes in cloak of dew...

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2005-05-03 04:03 PM

many good lines here

lovely write Barry
much enjoyed

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2005-05-03 04:19 PM

Very very beautiful, dear Barry!

You truly see with the heart.

Love, Margherita

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2005-05-03 04:30 PM

A beautiful write here Barry!
Very very much enjoyed the read.
Hugs~Nancy

Life is one great big canvas;
throw all the paint on it you can.
-Danny Kaye

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

4 posted 2005-05-03 04:54 PM

In agreement with my sister Enchantress. Wonderful Magnus my friend. hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

5 posted 2005-05-03 05:32 PM

Barry,
Well done, enjoyed the read.

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