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Open Poetry #35

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Laoha
Member

since 2003-03-07

Posts 161
Nevada, USA

0 posted 2005-05-03 01:44 AM

The flower in between Buddha’s fingertips,
The smile on Mona Lisa’s face,
The concern
From one soul to another
Is filling up the evening sky
With the colors of beautiful clouds.

LAOHA'S PEN

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2005-05-03 06:59 AM

nice one

Cloud 9
Senior Member

since 2004-11-05

Posts 980
Ca

2 posted 2005-05-03 01:16 PM

Short yet sweet!

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

3 posted 2005-05-03 02:09 PM

beautiful and serene. excellent Laoha

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2005-05-04 07:28 PM

Enjoyed...James

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

5 posted 2005-05-04 07:30 PM

vivid imagery.....

I don’t mind spending everyday
Out on your corner in the pouring rain
Look for the girl with the broken smile
Ask her if she wants to stay awhile

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