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Laoha
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0 posted 2005-05-03 01:44 AM


The flower in between Buddha’s fingertips,
The smile on Mona Lisa’s face,
The concern
From one soul to another
Is filling up the evening sky
With the colors of beautiful clouds.

LAOHA'S PEN


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passing shadows
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1 posted 2005-05-03 06:59 AM


nice one
Cloud 9
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2 posted 2005-05-03 01:16 PM


Short yet sweet!
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3 posted 2005-05-03 02:09 PM


beautiful and serene. excellent Laoha


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4 posted 2005-05-04 07:28 PM


Enjoyed...James
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5 posted 2005-05-04 07:30 PM


vivid imagery.....

I don’t mind spending everyday
Out on your corner in the pouring rain
Look for the girl with the broken smile
Ask her if she wants to stay awhile

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