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Ericc
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0 posted 2005-05-02 02:37 PM



To cling to
nothing...

But the empty space that
falls between us.

Though still my hands taste you
near.

As if this nothing...belonged to
only you.



© Copyright 2005 Eric P McCarty - All Rights Reserved
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2005-05-02 02:44 PM


You always manage to take my breath away with you words Eric.
Beautifully penned.
Hugs~Nancy

Life is one great big canvas;
throw all the paint on it you can.
                    -Danny Kaye

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2 posted 2005-05-02 03:01 PM


belonged to only you

yes... that place is for only one... *S*

This is stunning, my friend...

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3 posted 2005-05-02 03:04 PM


Ericc
Yes

Sunshine
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4 posted 2005-05-02 03:05 PM



There is something sincere
about a writing
when one encompasses the senses used
to carry on a lingering....

Thank you, Eric.

passing shadows
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displaced
5 posted 2005-05-02 04:04 PM


sometimes the nothing is everything
DavePage
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6 posted 2005-05-02 04:32 PM


And people still feel they need to build physical walls when mental ones often exist until death

The unwritten words sing a background

Dave

Margherita
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Eternity
7 posted 2005-05-02 05:09 PM



And only you
have free entry
to this space
that holds
just pure love,
filtered essence
of what is,
before and after
a flash of
fulfilled dreams.
Rolling in and out
of the vastness
of cosmic breath.


Nothingness inspires when it is captured by you, dear Eric! This is beautiful!

I love you.
Margherita


JamesMichael
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8 posted 2005-05-02 05:18 PM


Nice...James
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with you
9 posted 2005-05-02 10:34 PM


sometimes, you hit the *sigh* on the head...and say it exactly perfectly right
Susan Caldwell
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10 posted 2005-05-05 01:04 PM


ohhhhhh...nice!!

glad I found this...

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

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