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Foxyoasis
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since 2003-06-10
Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

0 posted 2005-05-02 12:30 PM



I just can't take this anymore
all my love I given you was thrown
out the door

I was there when you were sick
helped you up around the room
even picked up the tissues
on your floor

How can you do this to me?
Don't you care? How can you say
it was all a shirade how can
you dare


Why come back to me when your
not even sure,why did I let you
come back into my heart to hurt me
once more.

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


© Copyright 2005 Julie O'Neill - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
1 posted 2005-05-02 01:51 AM


Nice writing...some do and some don't...James
HopeS
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since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia
2 posted 2005-05-02 02:33 AM


ouch !! sad indded , I could sense the hurting in your heart

Hope

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
3 posted 2005-05-02 07:24 PM


oh
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