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Azure Allure (A Dark Angel request)
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Azure Allure (A Dark Angel request) |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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Safely from a distance perched upon the cool stones she gazes at her in silent admiration she rests peacefully cradled in dawns arms and then, slightly yawning she stirs with first sleepy breath of morning slowly exhaling sending soft ripples across the perfect stillness of her soul. She hears the winds as they mock her in lucid reflection how they tease her, tantalizing her to awaken gently lapping against the smoothness of her curves coaxing her into blissful grand awakening and like a voyeur she watches as she wakens to embrace the tide greedily swallowing the fury of swell taking it deeply into her belly in soft rise and fall then subtly receding in perpetual motion that sways her to complacency..... She rises from the rock feeling as though she had invaded something private, something sacred yet privileged... and as she turns to go she hears her whispering her melodical tune and glances back with slight smile knowing that she will return to her azure lure again soon... very soon.... Dedicated to you, Maree.... for allowing me to find her again.  I really want to care, I want to feel something, let me dig a little deeper nah, still nothing~ my give a DAMN is busted. Jodee |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
How lovely this is Donna. Beautiful indeed. Love ya lady~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
How beautiful you write of her, Donna. She inspires me too, but haven't written of her yet and I don't think I could, so well.  |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
hand over heart, i knew this would be beautiful, oh Donna, you make me sighh. you have done her justice indeed, like i knew you would. Absolutely stunning, oh i read it to myself at first, then out loud so that she could hear you Donna, and you should hear her and see how she sends waves and waves of applause, along with me. I thank you so very much, i am smiling from ear to ear. into my library. BellaMxx smile. "we all have wings, but some of us don't know why" Michael Hutchence (INXS) |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
absolutely beautiful write |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Nancy you know how much your words mean to me, thank you. Martie I can not imagine you having not writing of her but I am sure that when/if you do we are all going to be in for a most beautiful treat.  Bella, if it made you smile than I am indeed blessed and grateful. Raph, I appreciate your words and visit, thanks so much. I really want to care, |
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adagio Member
since 2005-03-19
Posts 449Marrero, La. |
A wonderfully enjoyable piece to read adagio |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very touching piece Donna |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
GentlestSpirit~ So softly alluring~ Lovely, lovely penning~ *Huglets*:hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
stirring to the senses in its intrigue and promise of a new day |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Adagio, Dixie, and Marge, I do appreciate you each stopping by and leaving your thoughts, you are most kind. I'm glad you enjoyed this. Peace.... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Michelle you snuck in there on me. Thanks much for the peek in this morning.  |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
She rises from the rock feeling as though she had invaded something private, something sacred yet privileged... ~*~ This is to know the depth of her... and the reason to hold close the awe... |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Maree is special...(not in a short school bus kind of way...)  Very sweet dedication Donna. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
What can I say that hasn't been already? This was beautiful, and has definetely gone to the library... Thanks for sharing Tima |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
hmmmmmmmmmmmmm some kewl in this kettle ms you do it so fine...enjoyed it |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Kari thank ya mum..Susan, yeah, she's like that... special yanno? a gem... James, thank you. Tima I appreciate the kind words thank you. Dark, thanks for your eyes this morning, and for the fine. and I am so glad you enjoyed  |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Beautiful just beautiful! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
then subtly receding in perpetual motion that sways her to complacency..... There is such quiet splendor in this beauty, and I am in awe! That's poetry in motion, and ever so lovely, Donna~ *applause* |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Sharon it is so good to see you dear, I hope all is well with you. Thanks for reading. Lori hon, I do so appreciate your visits and always the thought you leave me with. Hugs sweetie |
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