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Dark Angel
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0 posted 2005-04-30 09:36 PM


she is sinuous
whole
she is effeminate
and again, in this morn
she is calm,
though a little disturbed

the wind mocks her
still

and she is like ...
a linen fabric, and her waves...
wrinkly
with tiny peaks
like the tips of mountains

you can almost feel her
against your skin

soft and piquant

she is lustrous
and when her curves meet the shore
the threads of her, burn
themselves
into your irises
and there
she'll remain forever
as she brings you gifts

wrapped in sea-spray

fan shells
spiral shells

to then bribe you
for your
sea-urchin thoughts





for you my gentle one *smile* Thank you for inspiring me to look deep within her.

Mxx

"we all have wings, but some of us don't know why"

Michael Hutchence (INXS)

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with you
1 posted 2005-04-30 09:39 PM


oh goodness, I love this...
Enchantress
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2 posted 2005-04-30 10:44 PM


This is beautiful Maree...
I know Donna will love it as much as I do.
Hugs~Nancy

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain ~

inkedgoddess
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3 posted 2005-04-30 10:58 PM


you write the textures of her with a keen pen
Gentle Spirit
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4 posted 2005-05-01 08:44 AM


  ohhhh Maree, you have done her justice and you have done me a great honour with this gorgeous gifting of her spirit...
I have no words Bella...
(and that other thing I was writing, suffice it to say could never bring her
justice the way that you have with this.)

Thank you Maree...for the specialness that makes up you. You have no idea how much this makes me smile and how it makes me feel so much closer to her and makes me want to return to her SOON!





I really want to care,
I want to feel something,
let me dig a little deeper
nah, still nothing~
my give a DAMN is busted. Jodee

Martie
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5 posted 2005-05-01 09:46 AM


Maree

This makes me want to take a little ride to the seashore.  Your imagery is so very beautiful and sensual.  

Margherita
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6 posted 2005-05-01 11:54 AM


It's as if the sea itself guided your pen ...

Very captivating.

Love, Margherita

Dark Angel
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7 posted 2005-05-01 05:44 PM


Thank you everyone for your kind words..

and Donna, you're most welcome and i thank you for inspiring me to write of her.

and I look forward to your offering, to be able to write of her as beautifully as you do when she is not there is awesome.

Bella Donna.

Mxx

"we all have wings, but some of us don't know why"

Michael Hutchence (INXS)

Gentle Spirit
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8 posted 2005-05-03 07:51 AM


ah Maree.....I just had to come back again,
see her, feel the spray...

and smile some more...

thank you Bella, your a doll.  

littlewing
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9 posted 2005-05-03 08:41 AM


A most beautiful gift from one special woman to another:

and there
she'll remain forever
as she brings you gifts


Maree, you bring me right there to her.  

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Gaia
10 posted 2005-05-03 09:01 AM


WOW!!!

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displaced
11 posted 2005-05-03 01:33 PM


now this
is beauty

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12 posted 2005-05-03 05:19 PM


all of this and more.....amazing...hugssssx2

I don’t mind spending everyday
Out on your corner in the pouring rain
Look for the girl with the broken smile
Ask her if she wants to stay awhile

Local Rebel
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13 posted 2005-05-03 10:23 PM


aesthetic and captivating offering

liked it much

Gentle Spirit
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14 posted 2005-05-07 09:18 AM


tappin my foot....waiting to see her...and those pics of her....


Maree, this will be ever special to me.  Hugs sweetie.


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