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Wrapped in sea-spray ( for Donna, our Gentle Spirit )
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Wrapped in sea-spray ( for Donna, our Gentle Spirit ) |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095
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she is sinuous whole she is effeminate and again, in this morn she is calm, though a little disturbed the wind mocks her still and she is like ... a linen fabric, and her waves... wrinkly with tiny peaks like the tips of mountains you can almost feel her against your skin soft and piquant she is lustrous and when her curves meet the shore the threads of her, burn themselves into your irises and there she'll remain forever as she brings you gifts wrapped in sea-spray fan shells spiral shells to then bribe you for your sea-urchin thoughts for you my gentle one *smile* Thank you for inspiring me to look deep within her. Mxx "we all have wings, but some of us don't know why" Michael Hutchence (INXS) |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
oh goodness, I love this...  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
This is beautiful Maree... I know Donna will love it as much as I do. Hugs~Nancy ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
you write the textures of her with a keen pen |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
 ohhhh Maree, you have done her justice and you have done me a great honour with this gorgeous gifting of her spirit...I have no words Bella...  (and that other thing I was writing, suffice it to say could never bring her justice the way that you have with this.) Thank you Maree...for the specialness that makes up you. You have no idea how much this makes me smile and how it makes me feel so much closer to her and makes me want to return to her SOON!  I really want to care, I want to feel something, let me dig a little deeper nah, still nothing~ my give a DAMN is busted. Jodee |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Maree This makes me want to take a little ride to the seashore. Your imagery is so very beautiful and sensual.  |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
It's as if the sea itself guided your pen ... Very captivating. Love, Margherita |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Thank you everyone for your kind words.. and Donna, you're most welcome and i thank you for inspiring me to write of her. and I look forward to your offering, to be able to write of her as beautifully as you do when she is not there is awesome. Bella Donna.Mxx "we all have wings, but some of us don't know why" |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
ah Maree.....I just had to come back again, see her, feel the spray... and smile some more... thank you Bella, your a doll. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
A most beautiful gift from one special woman to another: and there she'll remain forever as she brings you gifts Maree, you bring me right there to her. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
WOW!!! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
now this is beauty |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
all of this and more.....amazing...hugssssx2 I don’t mind spending everyday |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
aesthetic and captivating offering liked it much |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
tappin my foot....waiting to see her...and those pics of her.... Maree, this will be ever special to me. Hugs sweetie. |
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