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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada 
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I need your hand in my hand Beneath the stars tonight Wishing you were with me In the new moonlight But I'm left in this condition Cause fate will have it's way And you had to leave me Alone on Plymouth Bay A distant voice has called you Somewhere beyond our home Some ancient trick of fortune Returned to take your soul And in my scarred acceptance With a heart so full of pain Tonight I really need you Right here on Plymouth Bay [Bridge] Near the wet kiss of the ocean I still hear your call Remembering how we'd roam Beside the boilin foam Like you never left at all Been hopin for second chance Just to set my mind to rest But good times are a treasure Still locked up in my chest So I find my spirit restless Thinking bout you everyday Wishing you were with me Tonight on Plymouth Bay IF YOU HAVE TO JUDGE SOMEONE DO IT ON THE SIDE OF MERCY AND LET TIME SEASON THE RESULTS. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I love it Eric...it sings to me  M |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Brilliant words Dave |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
very much enjoyed this |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a lovely song and you know I love the sad ones |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
ethome A delight to sing. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
*bump* |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Eric I especially like the bridge. As in all of yours, the music is in the words.  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Eric, you are a True troubadour! "Near the wet kiss of the ocean I still hear your call Remembering how we'd roam Beside the boilin foam" ~ I can see it, hear it, feel it ~ and remember... Thank you for bringing back some magical moments of my own. Linda |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Gee thank ya all for the kind words and thoughts I surely appreciate them. Eric |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I need your hand in my hand Beneath the stars tonight Wishing you were with me In the new moonlight But I'm left in this condition Cause fate will have it's way How very beautiful... and universal... the locations may be different, but many know the yearn. *S* |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Eric~ This is a lovely testament to your beautiful musical talents~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
This poem sings to me so perfectly that I can almost hear the waves crashing against the rocks....*sigh* how I miss the magic of the ocean and the soothing sounds it filled my heart with....BRAVO!!! BRAVO!!! I love it...*big hugs* |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Eric....one question....do you have a website where you've got the music? Great lyrical poem. ....jo |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
I like this one alot. Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I found myself humming the likes of "Galway Bay" whilst reading this, and loved it with a Celtic, folksy kind of melody. Really a pretty song Eric. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"But good times are a treasure Still locked up in my chest" time to find that key, eh? amazing, how we always enjoy a 'sad' tune  nice blues stuff |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ethome, for some reason tonight I really heard the salt of this song... it is not a fast song, more of a ballad in my ear, and I can hear a few of the lines strung out on heart notes... it's good... when are you going to come to our area and perform, anyway? We could use some new blood, and some great music! |
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