Open Poetry #35 |
The Ivory -Billed Phoenix Aligns With Confucious |
ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
If a man takes no thought about what is distant, he will find sorrow near at hand." Confucius, The Confucian Analects ************************************ Something said extinct appears, A trick, mirage, or slight Of hand, perhaps A Phoenix rises From an earthen wilderness, Birthing itself From its own extrusions, Pressed through the die Of long passed history? Reborn This feathered solid Fly's triumphant Into mans view once again, On the highly polluted air Of a much ignored past .... The great bird lifts... Waving white-truce flags, Red-crest in full extent Above a pointed beak Of chiseled ivory, Making a mockery Of mans old errors; Coming near at hand, To be reexamined; Hope rising from the ashes Of our near at hand sorrows... |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
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Hey ice...FANTASTIC my friend! This is an incredible piece of poetry. The image of the phoenix is so real in my mind at this moment...makes me not want to lay down and sleep...but rather sit here and ponder your words...even though I am running on 3 hours of sleep this morning. I love this poem my friend...never stop doing what you do oh so well. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Wisdom and beauty combined in this very appealing piece. Love, Margherita |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ford "the grest bird lifts" It certainly does in this poem. Amazing! I loved it! |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
I must agree with everyone on this fine piece. :-) <^^> Today the pond....Tomorrow the world |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Goodness, this is stunning! Sauni:) |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
You have made me smile, poet friends...... The return of a species after so many years is very exciting to me... As are these nice comments.... Thank You -----------ice/ford ><> |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WOW! An amazing write here Ford... wonderful imagery brought it to life. Well done! Hugs~N ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Thank you, Nancy..... If anyone wants to read more about this amazing discovery, go here... http://www.howlingthemoon.org/archives/2005/04/the_bird_that_c.html --------ice ><> <>< |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
provocative and packed with great visions , i liked this one very much iceman.... -wolf |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Reborn This feathered solid Fly's triumphant ~*~ Yes! Also, see... /pip/Forum44/HTML/000561.html |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
amazing write! |
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