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Choka into a Cruise.[if you're going to blame anyone...read on!]
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Choka into a Cruise.[if you're going to blame anyone...read on!] |
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Sunshine
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Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Choka into a Cruise… based on Gentle Spirits link here… /pip/Forum29/HTML/001875.html [She’s been thinkin’, don’t y’know…] She thought a little Choka would get us in the groove… So…[don’t critique for goodness’ sake…we’re just having fun!] add along! A Poetstock with no clocks no time to watch but fun... come aboard the Poet'ship where life and love is really hip! Barrels of rum, or wine to sip... flip-flops required so we don't slip! Someone's in the corner rhyming to da-dum someone's in the pool... this is too much fun! Pina Coladas, Margarita style, redbeer and Koolaid...draw the kids near! Young and old and in-between nothing a cruise director's ever seen! Poets who rhyme or verse in free... ballads and dears, and spirits in glee... songs in chant and storied lines... prose in glow, the air is fine... A Poetstock with no clocks no time to watch but fun... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
groanzzz....I always get the blame!! lmao!! The tick of tock will come to stop as hours pass away we'll sail upon the deep blue seas and feel the mist of ocean breeze and fill the skies with gaiety as we hear the whispers of poetry on the wind... Yes, I think this "Poetstock" will show that poets REALLY know how to rock! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I just thought I'd leave a note to tell you both I don't do boats so if you'll check the thread again I offered up a different spin A little bit of carnival in a house to keep us ALL.  |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I'll do better than the Marlboro man... I'll walk to N'awlins... to prove that I can... I'll do the walk and stow the boat just to see the carnival floats! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I'm really not very good at rhyming to da-dum but if I sit in the corner I'll have that shot of rum...  (or two, or three...  ) |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
laughing in delight at this poet play- geeze ladies - you've made my day S If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Susan's on board, or is she walking with me? A merry couple we'd make just the two of we... but we need much more, for a party's in store, we'll crash N'awlins... and cause a big scene! then we'll escape to the boat! for a cruise must begin the Poet'ship's launching and they're serving up gin! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I'd love to come!  If I'm promised a mint julep! And I'll bring a handful of tulips One for every poet on board... My outfit will have everyone floored! I'm certain the male gender will admire For this cruise my well chosen attire, It's hotter down south so I'm told.. I'll wear something skimpy and outright bold! Oh come on...it will be such fun.. Don't tease me because I cannot 'da dum'. We'll dance and laugh with so much gleeee Away out there upon the high sea. |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
A Poet's cruise? I choose for the booze And poetic nights In moon silver lights And during the day I'm at rail if I may To roll my reel And yell when I feel A fish on my line Wouldn't that be fine We'll cook it together In Sun warming weather Oh boy, Oh boy Whatever the joy If we should meet My dream indeed Titia, waiting to win the lottery tomorrow on our Queen's day. Keep your fingers crossed. (ha ha only thing I ever won with that, couldn't even pay for an icecream these days) Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Sounds like fun to me. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Serenity I've checked your note it's ok, we don't have to take a boat, we can keep our feet on solid ground while mixing and mingling words around putting poetic talents on display We can come down Louisiana way and have ourselves the most passionate of days, drinking some special Serenity brew maybe even have some crawfish stew! It doesn't really matter where it's held you see, there will be good times with friends and poetry! |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Cast the sails into the sky, Pour me a drink—Captain Bligh, Sing a song of ocean spray, As we skim about the bay. Here’s a thought that mayhap’s fun, Let’s limbo ‘til gone’s the sun, In laughter let the day be tucked, And the night we’ll reconstruct. Call forth the band, play a song, Poets gather in a throng, Lift your glasses high in toast, And a pig or two we’ll roast. Hugs for all to give and share, Kisses sweetened by friends there, Give me a ticket…I’m so gone, But ask me not to wear a thong! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
A limo with a jacuzzi in the back Time, my friends we'll lose track We'll not ask EV to wear a thong as long as he just tags along to enjoy the fun, in the sun! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I’m off to join PiP friends at sea, I’ll bring along all sides of me. ~ The sage, the siren, my inner child, With a touch of class ~ and a lotta wild! My Mary drink won’t be a Virgin, My Shirley Temple with gin will burgeon. No sissy beers or sparkling wine, A whiskey neat will do me fine. I’ll slip my vestments off my body, Wear something red and sheer and gawdy. Paint my lips with crimson slicker, To raise the rate of each man’s ticker. I’ll toss away my wings and halo, And swivel my hips just like J-Lo. Sing raunchy songs to stir the blood, And wrestle guys nude in the mud. This fallen angel’s hot for fun, From early morn ‘til day is done. So bring it on and lets set sail, ~ and not to search for holy grail!!! |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Through far away mists Either by sea, or ashore Some poets now float ~ Whether by dream or by wave Fashion their own rainbow coat |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
OMG ~ Did I write that?!? The nurse must have put some strange concoction in my intravenous! Actually, the IV does appear to have a strange hue emanating from it! lol |
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