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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2005-05-01 07:56 AM


Juice of the Fruit

The juice of the fruit makes the wine
It’s this symbol on which we dine
Weather wet or dry or in your eye
It’s juice of the fruit that makes for sighs

I have sighed over many a sip
The thrill of the taste upon the lip
The aroma that stops the roamer
That places the mind in a coma

But the heart flutters for air to breathe
For life is a struggle of bequeath
And unless the key turns the lock
I’m afraid there will be no flock

It is a process of learn and try
Sometimes you learn and sometimes you die
But to me within the overall
Juice is a powerful carryall

Drink you your fill but not till it spill
Swish it around and taste for the ill



© Copyright 2005 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Rick
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1 posted 2005-05-01 08:05 AM


Seymour, enjoyed the read and about to get another juice, a red or a white? or one of each, headache tomorrow! What the hell, be well my friend and take care.

Sincerely
Rick

EvocativeVerse2
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2 posted 2005-05-01 08:30 AM


Love this Seymour. Hell yeah. Over the past couple years I have been planting grape vines in the acre behind my house...one day I am going to attempt to make my own juice. (Wink!) That is no lie either. Wonderful poem dear friend...one I can relate to so very, very well.
Enchantress
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3 posted 2005-05-01 09:41 AM


Love this one Sy.
Had a wee nip of the dry red last night myself...
Nectar from the gods it is.
Much enjoyed this morning's read.
~Morning hugs & I think we should have tea, Nancy~  


~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain ~

Margherita
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4 posted 2005-05-01 10:27 AM


I prefer the "amabile", but rarely. This was a great read, perfect for Sunday!

Love and Joy.
Margherita

Earth Angel
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5 posted 2005-05-01 12:09 PM


Sir Sigh the Sonneteering Sommelier ~

I enjoyed this sip from your pen's tip!

I have missed your morning shot of thy wit and charm. I have been in hospital for the past week. Actually, I'm I still hooked up to IV at home for another week! The tubing is getting in the way of my keying this reply! lol

Love & Living Light,
EA

Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2005-05-01 01:34 PM


Rick
There is juice and there is juice, you have to be careful of some. Thanks for the read and comment.

Evocative,
When they grow and develop and you make wine
Don't forget me. LOL

Nancy,
Ready for tea, thank you

Margherita,
Love and joy back.

Earth Angel
Missed you and didn't know you were in the hospital. Nothing serious I hope? But glad you are home now. So this tumble weed has now becone a sommelier. What kind if juice would you like madame.

nakdthoughts
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7 posted 2005-05-01 05:04 PM


I don't do too well with wine of late...not sure if I am allergic to it or only because it is from the local wineries...besides drinking just slows me down so I drink of your words instead.


M

Seymour Tabin
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8 posted 2005-05-01 06:10 PM


Maureen,
Thank you dear.

passing shadows
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9 posted 2005-05-02 04:58 PM


Sy, I was not online for long yesterday so I missed this. Not much time for sleep before work again.

Glad I went back down the page to find this juicy write

LeeJ
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10 posted 2005-05-03 06:47 AM


hugs, nicely done dear Sy....
Seymour Tabin
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11 posted 2005-05-03 07:37 AM


passing,
You are a dear.

LeeJ
Thank you sweet.

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