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Midnitesun

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Gaia

0 posted 2005-04-30 10:01 PM

Stop me
if I go too fast.

The day is young
but I feel my time
is fleeting
and the hours are never enough;
so sometimes,
I rush to get to
the grand finale
and put myself in danger
of missing
a tender critical step.

So please,
stop me…
if I go too fast.

© Copyright 2005 Kathleen Kacy Stafford - All Rights Reserved

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with you

1 posted 2005-04-30 10:15 PM

"and the hours are never enough;"

that is too true...
great write

passing shadows
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displaced

2 posted 2005-04-30 10:15 PM

no sense in rushing Kacy
the roses smell nice

Margherita
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Eternity

3 posted 2005-05-01 04:32 PM

Stopping you!

This is wise, dear Kacy! We must slow down to fully LIVE.

Very significant!

Love, Margherita

Martie

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4 posted 2005-05-01 04:57 PM

Kacy

I am the same way and completely understand...hard to stop a whirlwind though.

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

5 posted 2005-05-01 05:05 PM

~smiling~ at the knowing of the going

M

DavePage
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6 posted 2005-05-01 05:20 PM

Yes

Good strong words

Dave

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