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adagio
Member

since 2005-03-19

Posts 449
Marrero, La.

0 posted 2005-04-29 09:06 PM

Put all your eggs
in my safe basket
I've lined it with moss
to keep it soft

You need pillows?
I'll make them for you
feathers will fill them
that you may rest

I am the rain
gently I will drip
into your garden
to keep it green

Let me be song
unto your sweet ears
a light sonata
to which we dance

adagio

[This message has been edited by adagio (04-29-2005 09:56 PM).]

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2005-04-29 09:08 PM

this is precious

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2005-04-30 01:07 AM

tender and sweet!
enjoyed this very much

Laoha
Member

since 2003-03-07

Posts 161
Nevada, USA

3 posted 2005-04-30 01:16 AM

wondering what's the implication of it.

nicely done!

LAOHA'S PEN

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

4 posted 2005-04-30 03:05 AM

smile

he is just that sweet, actually

You know I like this one R, reads like a featherbed of comfort.

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2005-04-30 08:44 AM

Adagio~
I like the gentle word-flow that sings me through this piece~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

Email noles1@totcon.com

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

6 posted 2005-04-30 09:45 AM

adagio
I'll go along with what they all say. Enjoyed

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

7 posted 2005-04-30 09:45 PM

soft and warm, *smile* i could rest there.

lovely

"we all have wings, but some of us don't know why"

Michael Hutchence (INXS)

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

8 posted 2005-05-01 04:34 PM

mmmmm ... dancing adagio!

Very lovely!

Love, Margherita

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

9 posted 2005-05-01 04:55 PM

adagio

A tender gift from a soft heart, perhaps? Lovely!

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

10 posted 2005-05-01 05:28 PM

lovely writing

M

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

11 posted 2005-05-01 06:32 PM

Very very lovely..like a soft caress.
Hugs~N.

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain ~

adagio
Member

since 2005-03-19

Posts 449
Marrero, La.

12 posted 2005-05-02 01:42 PM

Thank you karen for letting me use your computer to post this piece. Thank the rest of y'all for reading! It gives me comfort to give comfort.

adagio

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

13 posted 2005-05-06 03:46 PM

Enjoyed your poetry~

~ARH

"Let me not to the marriage of true minds
Admit impediments; love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to

MorninGlory
Member

since 2003-08-30

Posts 175
Oklahoma

14 posted 2005-05-21 01:35 AM

One who wants to please another, to fulfill their every wish, to be the one - the special one - the only one that can do it right. Oh we all want this person! In my dreams.. *sigh*

becky

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