Open Poetry #35 |
coreopsis tanka |
Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Coreopsis climbs upward steep slopes threatening to stop clinging thoughts follow the ascent of hearts follows eyes seeking a higher place |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Something follows sun seeking yet a higher place hitherto, they climb Seasons come, and seasoned, all follow dreams only they know ~*~ Smiling at you, and thanking you, m'friend, for the inspiration! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Lady Sunshine, thanking you for such a poetic reply! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
the ascent of hearts follows eyes seeking a higher place Tremendous |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
i agree with LeeJ...."tremendous" |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Kacy These thoughts contain gold Like found in coreopsis That bloom all summer The flowers of these two hearts We hope will constant blossom enjoyed ----------ice ><> |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kacy~ Tanka you for the pure golden beauty of your thoughts~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
lovely piece |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
The upward movement is felt! This is very beautifully done! Love, Margherita |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Thanks! Coreopsis grows all over the hillsides of southern California, and my hiking days were always brightened by these hardy colorful cliff hangers. |
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