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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio 
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Do you hear me calling as the robin paints the morning and my voice comes at its strongest in its hopes to reconnect with you, do you feel my hands caressing as they trace you like a flower that the dew weaves on the petals, do you sense me at your fortress where your towers grow to hide me, do you remember we were lovers, do i continue to exist for you? in the thicket of the forest at the crescendo of our torch song. [This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (04-29-2005 08:55 AM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
how could any man ever forget that you were his lover? |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
very hot indeed .... and too such building of this flame!! ... perhaps the heat was taken as unBAREable?! |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Nice words Dave |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Michelle, I really like this.... And....I'll bet he does remember.... Hugs, Ethel  |
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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
consider it bumped.....  |
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PassionandFun Member
since 2003-07-30
Posts 60 |
hmmmm what words, what images, what a fool to have ever left you.... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
glad this came back up Michelle, very well done.  |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
enjoyed~~  M |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I hear him in the background yelling Yes, to each and every question This was georgous!!!! How could he not say yes? Hugs |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"do you remember we were lovers, do i continue to exist for you? in the thicket of the forest at the crescendo of our torch song." this is wonderful...and for the record they always remember...and when they don't do right by us may they be haunted by it forever. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Once it is begun....it never ends. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
I don't know how anyone could forget. absolutely lovely M "we all have wings, but some of us don't know why" |
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