Open Poetry #35 |
she sighs at the night (a duet with the divine Gentle Spirit - Donna ) |
Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
In the quiet of still moments hear her in harmony of sweet serene crescendo's building to rise and fall listen! oh listen to her voice when she calls softly she moves to touch you with delight in silhouetted glow reflecting shimmers of moon's light she sighs at the night and in her pausing? reach for the wet mouth of her the blue swell that is her breathing swallow the cries of her breaking as she lays them solitary onto the edge of land night after night this is her plight do not love her without love for she exists and will give to you her morning with visions of amber splendor she seduces the dawn in tidal motions caressing you with her essence she the temptress entices the tempest and rages in her darkness while soothing you in gentle sway stealing your gaze you are spell-bound powerless she'll take control to leave you breathless and wanting more. "we all have wings, but some of us don't know why" Michael Hutchence (INXS) |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Donna, thank you for giving me the opportunity to work together on a duet with you. I am truly honoured. I love how this happened, like it was meant to be. Thank you, m'gentle one Mxx "we all have wings, but some of us don't know why" Michael Hutchence (INXS) |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I love how this happened, too... so many overlapping lines of sensuousness... without becoming cloying - a simple knowledge of here she is, take her, but know you will never leave her... Yes...a verifiable Love, Mom |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a lovely duet I love duets, just can't do them God only promises a safe landing, not a calm flight. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
nice flow as one voice blending within eachoters it works !! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
and rages in her darkness while soothing you in gentle sway stealing your gaze you are spell-bound powerless she'll take control to leave you breathless and wanting more. and that is exactly how the words of this poem enslaved me... wanting more Excellent write ladies, well done...bravo! |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
beautiful weaving ladies, graceful and elegant..like its authors |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
hmmm you two do well together' enjoyed the entwine here |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
A true crescendo of emotions! Great duo girls! A "happening" that deserves Love, Margherita |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
beautiful both poem and gal/s..... x2 hugsssss ~~*~~ |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Maree, yeah, it is so odd how it happened and yep, it sure seemed like it was meant to happen, and I am so extremely grateful that it did. I never dreamed when I wrote that other poem of my love for the sea that it would inspire me in ways for this one also...but it truly was your descriptions of her there by your side that helped to jog the memories of her for me. Damn....I miss her. You have blessed me, thank you m'dear. Someday, I will find the appropriate words to thank you but for now just know....you have touched me. Kari, you know how much your words mean to me. luv ya mom..... Hey Dixie, I have to disagree, I remember doing a beautiful duet with you! Thanks for stopping in. Mish, thanks so much. writing with Maree was sooo....fantastic! Lee, I thank you so much! Raph, aw shucks......lol... thanks much DS, it twas my pleasure to be entwined with such a fantastic lady thanks babe. Margherita, I do appreciate that. It was a beautiful unplanned happening and I think that is what makes it so very special to me. Thank you sweet lady. Lauren baby, you know I sis, and your words mean so very much to me. I really want to care, |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Maree and Donna The ocean has brought me so much joy during my life....she is indeed like you say so well. Loved this duet!!! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Wonderful duet! Brava! hugs, Chris Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Maree and Donna...this is one of the most beautiful duets ever at Passions! I am at a loss for words.. Brava ladies...Brava!! ~Hugs to you both~ |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Thank you all soooo very much, doing this duet with Donna was a real pleasure and so much fun and is very special to me. You're a Gem Donna. A very special Lady and Poet. I will duet with you anytime. Thank you. I am looking at her, she rests peacefully this morn. Though the wind mocks her. smile Bella Donna! Mxx "we all have wings, but some of us don't know why" |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Martie, Chris and Nancy, thank you each for your words, I truly appreciate it. Maree? Bella.... You humble me and make me even in your replies you write such beauty, ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I am looking at her, she rests peacefully this morn. Though the wind mocks her. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ you do realize that reply is pure poetry waiting to happen don't ya gal? An honour, indeed mine to duet with you lady.... ANYTIME. Have a great day/night everyone! I really want to care, I want to feel something, let me dig a little deeper nah, still nothing~ my give a DAMN is busted. Jodee |
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~K~ Member
since 2004-07-27
Posts 148 |
The myth subjected to reality leaves everybody wanting. ...I'm not sure what that has to do with anything but I felt it needed saying. (I've been wandering aimlessly for awile) Thanks for asking D.A.! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice read |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
~K~ usually if I feel it needs to be said, I go ahead and say it. Thanks for stopping in. Good to see you Vandana, thanks for your reply. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Donna? " you do realize that reply is pure poetry waiting to happen don't ya gal? " why don't you go for it? it's a request/challenge ... Thank you Bella. ~K~ "I'm not sure what that has to do with anything but I felt it needed saying" Speak and i shall listen. Thanks for wandering aimlessly into this thread Vandana, thanks for reading. Thank you all so very much. and Donna? and Thank you. Mxx "we all have wings, but some of us don't know why" |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Outstanding! This is one of the best duets I've read. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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freewheelin Member
since 2005-04-09
Posts 53 |
awesome write, really seductive. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
simply wonderful...the flow between you two captured me and began this day for me with a lift. Thank you both hugs M |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
wowsa , hot and hotter you two are awesome as always ...woof woof - wolfy |
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adagio Member
since 2005-03-19
Posts 449Marrero, La. |
So great and yes seductive made me read it over and over......... adagio |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
You are all so wonderful and I am glad that you enjoyed this blending of words. Maree, thank you...thank you...thank you... again... I really want to care, |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Absolutely wonderful... you blend seamlessly! *S* |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Thank you all for your kind words and support... Donna? Thank You! Mxx "we all have wings, but some of us don't know why" |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Exquisite duetting ladies, but one would expect no less from the likes of you two. This is a fine compliment to poetry and the written word. Impressive, indeed~ Kudos, hugs and all that! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Lori, sorry my reply comes so late... It is so good to see you hon and I hope your doing well. Maree. It was a pleasure. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
O M G ladies... this is so excellent I am keeping this... wow wow wow! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Sea, I almost missed your comment. Thank you for stopping in and I am sooo pleased that you enjoyed this! |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
nice |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I think so...James |
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