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A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2005-04-28 03:30 AM

Here I am,
seek me,
nothing hidden,

Find me,
here with you,
where I
have been?

In your
heart...

all alon(e)g...

"Let me not to the marriage of true minds
Admit impediments; love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to

Goldenrose
Member Elite

since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

1 posted 2005-04-28 04:50 AM

Interesting play on words here...

Goldenrose.

Justice cannot be for oneside alone, but must be for both. (Eleanor Roosevelt)

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2005-04-28 07:19 AM

neat ending

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

3 posted 2005-04-28 10:11 AM

big smiles

ThUnDeRkYsS
Senior Member

since 1999-09-23

Posts 727
Wisconsin

4 posted 2005-04-28 10:57 AM

Beautiful, the best things are always right in front of us... arent they!

Brian

Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer.

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

5 posted 2005-04-29 10:16 AM

good read

CastleGuard
Senior Member

since 2003-04-30

Posts 760
Alberta, Canada

6 posted 2005-04-29 11:25 AM

A love forged by fire will forever leave its imprint in a heart of a man...

CG

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

7 posted 2005-04-29 09:36 PM

I like how you did the ending - and it is a thought filled piece - enjoyed-

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

8 posted 2005-04-30 04:12 AM

enjoyed

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

EvocativeVerse2
Senior Member

since 2003-09-10

Posts 1279

9 posted 2005-05-01 01:18 AM

This is absolutely great ARH. I hate sounding like a broken record...but I have to agree with everyone else...the ending to this piece just ROCKS! Loved it! Very, very, well done. I would love to see more like this...it is my kind of poetry.

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