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Pickpocket |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
She took a chance Reaching in the pocket of his pants, He noticed but didn't care Since there wasn't anything there, And as there she did linger Caressing and gently finger, She gave him a questioning glance, There her hand stayed And the band so softly played, They left together at the end of the dance. Gloom |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
if there was nothing there, why'd she leave with him? LOL |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"Caressing and gently finger, She gave him a questioning glance" lol...she didn't find what she thought she wanted...she found what she needed and left with him.  excellent! "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
as always, your poems see right through the soul to the other side...tremendous Hello and Good Morning, this was amazing |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
...reaching out to those in need... good one! K |
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Dautz Write Member
since 2004-11-16
Posts 96 |
Shure was entertaind by this. Humor written with good form |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I remember "her" or someone like her  |
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